|Reviews for Blood for Children|
| DRARRYLOVR4EVERINMYHEART chapter 3 . 4/20
AMZING JOB I LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON PLEASE I WANT TO READ MORE
| DRARRYLOVR4EVERINMYHEART chapter 2 . 4/20
AMAZING JOB I LOVE IT!
| DRARRYLOVR4EVERINMYHEART chapter 1 . 4/20
DUMBLES IS AN IDIOTIC PERSON
| The arithmancer chapter 3 . 2/25
| bitethepagan chapter 2 . 10/31/2014
I just love this story. I re-read it a couple of times a year. It's well written with few spelling/grammar errors and the storyline is great.
| The Somebody of Nobody chapter 3 . 6/13/2014
Liked this very much.
| Sheogorath chapter 1 . 5/12/2014
"The man held a robe. It had a hood with something attached to the open face so that it wasn't open but he could see. He also held a pair of long gloves, and tall, soft-soled boots that looked a lot like socks. And underwear. And soft pants. And a soft shirt. In short, he held an entirely new, not second-hand, outfit."
When I first read this fic I thought the above was such a good idea that I was going to use it, but then I invented the Sol Tegminis spell instead because I couldn't remember your name or easily search for this fic on my phone, and I didn't want to plagiarise your work.
| Les Dowich chapter 3 . 6/15/2013
I read this story a long while ago and loved it, so when it came up in an email recently, I reread it and still loved it. Your revisions and explanations for your thinking are a great addition and do clear up the slight confusion that some jumps in the original story caused.
On the down side, once again, it stops without going on to reach its full potential which is such a shame as it is a very interesting start and would b well worth the completion. (Hint, hint!)
It's good, don't stop
| Autumn Skyie chapter 3 . 5/23/2013
Such a fascinating web you're weaving!
| 0099 chapter 2 . 1/17/2013
Okay, this fanfic started off good, then got incredibly ridiculous. Harry's personality completely flip-flopped. And a girl pulling him onto her lap-really? NO ONE IN THE RIGHT MIND WOULD EVER DO THAT TO A STRANGER! But I guess your audience are those fangirls that drool over "cute" moments like that. I loved this fanfic at first, but now I can't even continue because of the mush and crap that goes on. Good luck.
| Matjes chapter 3 . 8/23/2012
Such a good story and it is on hiatus T.T i hope you countinue to write this fiction, because i like the stile, i like the story and the most i like the idea and how all charakters war working :3
| Beloved Daughter chapter 3 . 4/7/2012
Interesting story. I love all the Hufflepuff unity elements! Hufflepuff is awesome! I just hope that you will update this story again soon...
| Griffin Raven chapter 3 . 2/4/2012
Absolutely loved this story the first edition and you have certainly only further improved it with the alterations and additions that you have made to the story.
I just love the elaborate detail you have given about the inner
workings of Hufflepuff house...the sett council...the house
offer self defense training to all...proper support offered to
the new 1st yrs by not only prefects but also the rest of the house! Though I particulary loved the interactions between; (a)
Harry and Renne; (b) Harry and the other 1st yr Hufflepuffs; (c) Harry and his adoptive father Severus.
Then Harry was introduced to his mentor/clan-brother Peter, whose Renne's mate...and him being adopted into there vampire
Clan, can only serve to offer young Harry further level of protection from other wiches and wizards. With Severus, being
Harry's Sire/adoptive father, would the vampire clan also be
offering the same level of protection that they'd give to Harry
to his adoptive father, or not?
Will Remus (and or Sirius) be making any further appearances or
simply be mentioned at all? I can't wait to find out just what
Arthur Weasley will say to his son Ron, in regards to the letters home that Percy, Fred & George sent about Ron's recent
behaviour/and comments about Harry Potter? Especially in light
of the very publically witnessed threatening behaviour & comments that Ron made towards Harry in the great hall, and his
very disastrous mistargeted arrow spell that injured Professor
Sprout rather than youn Harry?
Its strange how Albus, hasn'twanted to have much to do with Harry, since there first disastrous meeting at Severus's home & his sorting into Huffle-puff...so will Albus keep his manipulations away from Harry, or is he too convinced that he isn't the "boy-who-lived"? Or is Albus, simply waiting for the right moment to meddle, does he want Harry out of Severus's control?
| cotton01 chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
Please please please dont keep it on hatius i loved the original one and was sad when i could no longer find it. Once i found this one posted i was so glad as i realy like this story it is original. So i will say again please please please dont have it on hatius.
P.S. I dont normaly give revues. This just shouws how much i want you to carry on with the story:)
| bitethepagan chapter 3 . 12/28/2011
Love this story. Hope it comes of Hiatus soon.