|Reviews for Disappointment|
| Kas3y chapter 10 . 11/11
I LOVED this, I also love how you made Neal hurt even more :P Keep up the amazing work :)
| Olivia chapter 10 . 10/10
Amazing fix, pure gold. Loved every second of reading it. X
| Ilse17 chapter 4 . 2/8
I'm not Peter's greatest fan, but I can't imagine him treating that way anyone so obviously in need for medical attention.
| PippaFrost chapter 10 . 1/4
OH MY GOD YOU EVIL HUMAN! POOR NEAL! I DEMAN A SEQUEL WHERE EVERYTHING IS GOOD AGAIN!
| PippaFrost chapter 7 . 1/4
WHAT?! ARE FUCKI- ARE YOU KIDDIN- WHAT?!
| Vania de Paula chapter 10 . 7/19/2014
Nossa. Quanta dor, tristeza... Que bom, que hauve pessoas que ajudaram e o apoiaram. Obrigada.
| Nadamalki chapter 1 . 5/19/2014
| annie rules chapter 10 . 8/17/2013
hey, i really loved this story :D :D
| Thaddeus MacChuzzlewit chapter 2 . 7/21/2013
So wait.., I'm reading along, enjoying the story, but now I'm confused. Are we talking about -2 degrees Celsius or Fahrenheit? Is that supposed to be really cold, or two degrees below freezing? I'm from the warm wet coast, so I didn't even know humans could survive -2 degrees Fahrenheit.
| MarJan53 chapter 3 . 7/20/2013
For a bunch of FBI agents they are pretty dense not one of themnoticed how much Neal was suffering
| MarJan53 chapter 2 . 7/20/2013
Peter can be such an idiot not seeing what is right in front of him and asking the right questions just taking a report as truewithout investigation he would never do that on a case I am disapointed in him it is probably a way to move story along but I have a thing about people getting in trouble for something they didn't do
| ClaMiAl chapter 10 . 2/22/2013
What a story! I loved the Neal whump and the Neal/Peter relationship recovery. There were some issues with tenses (switching between present and past tense), but that was a relatively minor problem.
| sami1010220 chapter 10 . 2/19/2013
Great fic, and a fantastic AN to end it. Fantastic job!
| gitana082 chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
Wow, lots of whump, but not self-serving. You did a great job showing the emotions of the main charachters, and Mozzie. The others are a bit to much pushed in the background, but maybe that's just my preception.
| BlueDiamondStar chapter 10 . 9/6/2012
So emotional. I laughed, I cried and angered, all in one story, ten chapters. Great story! I got my *dose* of Neal whump high and managed to read it all in one night, under two hours time.
I really don't mind ending. For movies I do. I hate that feeling of cliffhanger at the end of a movie.
But for story it always gives me variety of fantasies to fill the rest of the picture. I think it's an art as well.
So thanks for writing such awesome piece.