|Reviews for Dylan's dairy|
| Katty Taylor chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
this is a good pov of dylan
| stormtaker chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
wow but sorta short ...
| themeduaproject chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
This is really good! I totally thought it was Dylan1 Hey...what's Dylan's mum called?
| FMAForge chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
This looks like a really good starting point!
You've summed up the Hunted really well.
As for improvement, try making the other chapters a bit longer, if you can.
And focus a bit more on how Dylan talks- the slang and everything.
So good luck!
| Cha-Cha-Cheesecake chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
Holy canoly, another MP fanfic x333 YAAAY~
Anyway. Onto the review.
This was interesting! :D But I'd prefer it if it were a bit longer, or has a few more chapters :)
You've pretty much captured Dylan's POV, but I personally think you should try and show Dylan's personality in your writing more. Like, whatever happened to her cocky talk and catchphrases, or even using "freakin'" in a sentence?
I love this though - Keep writing for the MP! :D
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
Wow! So good! I haven't read the books but it looks interesting! Please write more!
| Whatever-the-weather chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
Great idea, love dylan, she is great, keep writing!