Reviews for The First Message
1sunfun chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
Nice.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
Somehow I've become very enamoured of the idea of Ari as Tim's guardian. I think that if anyone could get to Ari, it would be McGee, and especially if Ari was thinking of what Tim could do for Ziva.
IAmTheTaintedAngel chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
Its really sad, but in a good way...well err you know ummmm anyway good job!
shadowdweller25 chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
I love how Tim not only gets past Gibbs' barriers but also Ari's. I'd really love to see more. :)
cgmt chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
I really enjoyed reading this, loved the sensitivity of Ari and how he saw Tim.
SassyJ chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
Beautifully written and quite intriguing. I would love to see a sequel.
hazelmom chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
This is fascinating. Is the first chapter based on a certain episode? I am really curious to see if there is more. Sheila
alix33 chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
"The medical examiner hides his smile when he sees the assorted juices that Gibbs is unloading. "Heavens Jethro, you bought out their entire line." "No, Duck just…some kids can't drink certain juices." - AW! at Giibs referring to Tim as a kid.

"A handwritten sheet slips out and he pales as he reads the letter written to him by his enemy. He picks up his cell phone and dials Ziva's number. "Umm…Ziva, can you come over here? I have something you need to see. I know that it's late but…I think you should see this...It's from Ari." - Now IMO Ziva will either be happy or quite angry once she reads that nore.
Gunner'sDream chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
...For now. woo! this is very interesting! can't wait to see if there will be more on this one and what ziva and tim's reactions will be!
Readergirl99 chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
This was great. But by "for now" do you mean you'll update here or you'll write a new story continuing from this? please respond!
Lidil chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
Hmmm.

Thought provoking.