Reviews for If You Fall
SnowHelm chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
This is a lovely piece. Excellent portrayl of Zevran and wonderful last line.
laloga chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
So lovely! You captured the hurt/comfort aspect perfectly, and I thoroughly enjoyed your portrayal of both Zevran and Adrian. :) Wonderful ficlet. :D
1Scarylady chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
Lovely last line. Thanks for sharing.
Nithu chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
I really liked this. I think you really nailed Zevran, his inexperience in dealing with someone else's feelings, not knowing how to offer comfort. It was especially poignant, as Zevran doesn't feel good at those things because he'd never had them himself.
Wehaswallhacks chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
nice, i really like how you express Adrian's need for a net, something to catch him.