Awwww this is so sweet

Sherlock … I love you just come on home. JW

AW! So sweet! This melted me, I so love it when they're just getting together! I have written a bunch of first kisses, I'm addicted. Please write more!

Wow... not many people can successfully pull if slash, and keep it in character and I am pleased to say that you have... SUCCEEDED! B-D

Ahh…this chapter was so cute in a slashy way, and made me laugh! Especially this line: “I must confess that the passionate feelings you tried to convey to me last night without a 'filter' are returned.” Makes you wonder what the heck went on the night before…and then makes you think maybe it’s best you don’t know!

“Perhaps we could then enter a romantic relationship?” Only Sherlock would come out with it that blatantly. And in a weird way, that’s cute.

“Stop hiding from the bloody CCV cameras!” I can definitely imagine that!

Ahh…the last line was lovely. Must have been SUCH a relief to John – a joy to imagine.

Love it - in character AND slash - that is skilled!

I like the premise of the texts and that, but you need to check your times. 24hr time doesn't actually have a 24th hour, it simply goes from 23:59 to 00:00 meaning midnight. so your text times are wrong, it should be 00:37 not 24:37 and unless Sherlock waited 12 hours to respond that 13:13 text would simply be 01:13. Hope that helps a little.

Most epic ending ever. Very cute and sweet. Loved it! XX

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww. So cute.