|Reviews for Touch Me: The Untouchable Outtakes|
| amber chapter 3 . 6/7
Make more of these they're great and I love them
| Rachael chapter 3 . 1/27/2014
I love your smut. I've a bunch of your stuff, and your smut is definitely great! Not too graphic, but not to vague. Its perfect!
Thanks so much for sharing your talents!
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/6/2013
I loved all of it! keep'em coming!
| Lexi chapter 3 . 6/18/2013
Beautiful, amazing, loved it! Can you write one where Jake is away, Nessie gets naughty thoughts and touches herself, and Jake comes home and catches her? Ooo ;D
| Anon chapter 3 . 5/24/2013
:) Loved it :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
Wel...all I can say is you should be a playwrite for porn... (Compliment-I Think)
| Countess Belle Von Venomhaus chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
Omg I need a cigarette
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/15/2012
Love it sooo detailed!
| LunaMoonera chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
Loved it! Very well written and super hot!
| midnightblue08 chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
Omg that was hot hot hot! I love their dirty sex talk hahaha the bathroom setting was perfect its a fantasy hehehehe
| Laziesttiger chapter 3 . 11/11/2011
I loved all your outtakes - really hot!.
Now gotta go find and read the main feature, lol
| Whittelily chapter 3 . 9/15/2011
| DubsDoll chapter 3 . 8/21/2011
I just finished reading your story and the outtakes also. To say I liked it would be an insult, I thoroughly enjoyed the hell out of it! You did a great job bringing the characters to life and progressing their life to make it a perfect story. Keep me posted on any more stories you write. Barbi
| RaeTakesTheWorld chapter 3 . 6/25/2011
I loved this D Wish you could add the dock part lol
| JakeNdNessObsessed chapter 3 . 6/15/2011
U really should write another jake nd ness story cuz as u can tell... IM OBSESSED!