Reviews for Hunter
maximusarjun chapter 19 . 1/8/2012
make a poem about predaliens, ending in hybrid.
Everlasting Life chapter 19 . 10/26/2011

How about you do one of when the hatchling is already inside and the thoughts of death to come next? :) Just an idea.

Everlasting Life chapter 18 . 10/26/2011
I've been away for too long! I loved this chapter and I've missed reading updates from you. I'm so glad you updated though! :D On to your new chapter! Keep up the fantastic work, my friend!
Hikarin-Love chapter 18 . 5/22/2011
Wow. I really like your writing. I'm not a fan of poetry but I am a fan of prose.

I would like to reguest a piece, if you don't mind. I'd like it to be about a high ranking Yautja in love with a human girl and his thoughts about whether he could really give it all up and become a Bad Blood for her.


Angel's Anthem not signed in chapter 18 . 5/21/2011
that was amazing! I love this idea though it's sad... great job, my friend! update soon!
RubyDracoGirl chapter 18 . 5/20/2011

I really like this.

Hmm, as far as ideas, I'd like to perhaps see an alternate ending for this particular predator. He tried really hard to kick that bad blood's $$ in the end... needless to say, I was a bit emotional that they just KILLED him.

That or maybe his thoughts before his final fight.

Just ideas, sorry I can't offer something better.

If I do, i will send a PM!
Everlasting Life chapter 17 . 5/13/2011
Brilliant writing! I love your combination of words. the way they flow together is fantastic! Please keep writing them! love them! love your writing! :D
RubyDracoGirl chapter 17 . 5/13/2011
wow... deep... sad...


But it's well done. I liked it. It's just sad. Just...

*bursts into tears*
Angel's Anthem chapter 16 . 3/14/2011
That was a great request! I'm so glad to see what you've done with it! :D Again, you never disappoint me in anything you do! This was great! you have such a wonderful way with endings, my friend! Elder... it sounds so great and proud!

I love it!

Can't wait to see what else you write!
Lemon Leopard chapter 16 . 3/12/2011
Well, I must say that I stand impressed. Well, actually sitting impressed, but it still means somewhat of the same thing. Anyways, your writing is getting a lot better since you have started this.

I am going to leave another request about Scar and Lex. Could you write a poem based on how Scar feels about her when Lex looks like a Yautja, because she was changed that way during a scientific experiment. I am sorry for my consistency of the pair, but I love them! Thanks for reviewing my story as well.
RubyDracoGirl chapter 16 . 3/12/2011



I loved the overall feel of this one, it's really awesome.
Legal Humor chapter 15 . 3/9/2011
Lol. I liked this one. It strangly made me smile at the end. O.O
Lemon Leopard chapter 15 . 3/8/2011
This is a strangely good poem.
RDG chapter 15 . 3/8/2011
Oh mai... A bit scary, gory, but surprisingly, I laughed at the end. Am I weird or what...

How about an adoption scenario?

Yautja adopting a human baby, or a human adopting a yautja baby?
Angel's Anthem chapter 14 . 3/8/2011
Oh this one was pure joy to read! I love this! It's amazing! Do you think you can do one relating to a mother's perspective of sending her son to the trial? :)

Thank you for all you do!
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