Reviews for Planet Twilight
sueIZide chapter 1 . 5/21
I found this on twifanfictinrecs. I'm intrigued by the synopsis.
SarcasticBimbo chapter 72 . 5/2
Wonderful story. I hope there is more. :)
jk chapter 19 . 4/29
haha he sniffed her ass! did it smell like poo? LOL
jk chapter 14 . 4/29
im confused...if a women is bound to a man by their...explosion I cant believe that's what its called then aren't any women with them bound to them...or did you say they can explode on will like...not do it... errr whatever its stupid anyway
and that whole breeder part in the vows? IN THE FUCKING VOWS?
I will cherish you and fuck this other woman on the side for the purpose of children...but don't worry you can pick her out with me...but no man is to touch you ever! typical
and bellas all...just your typical normal yaaa oookkkkk
so assward is gonna have 3 baby mamas...normal kids and kids that look like cats...whats next?
jk chapter 13 . 4/28
mama angel...scoffs is that supposed to be cute?
and now we get to read about bella being all low self esteem...greeeaat
if shes so fucking plain and ugly what the fuck is she doing there?

and hey, why do they only steal virgins when the men have fucking kids and shit? bastards
jk chapter 12 . 4/28
the bastard kitten can talk?so its like child size? so its not a kitten? what the fuck is it? it sure talks a lot and is super annoying!
bella...of course ill be your mama ive known your dad for 2 days! its like an entire lifetime! fuckin stupid
jk chapter 11 . 4/28
yaaaa im sure a mature woman had no idea how to bind a man to her...she was only born on that planet...and he was raped...ooookkkk...and tanyagave birth to a kitten?...gross...and they never pressed charges...and they still let her work for them...ooookkkk
seems like you just wanted to create conflict and didn't do it well
and bella all oh you have kids...oh im sure their just lovely...I love her already...of course ill be the mother of someone elses love to its such an honor! im so glad I was kidnapped and forced into being a maid and sex slave to a old man with a kid! im truly blessed!
bellas a fucking idiot
jk chapter 8 . 4/28
hes 35? gross
hes probably a whore too don't think I didn't notice that Tanya shit I bet he used to be with her
jk chapter 3 . 4/28
ummmmm so she was abducted forced to train to be some mans bitch and when shes picked he tells her she cant talk to any guys, has to clean and cook three meals a day from scratch and shes cool with that?
wow bellas a fucking pathetic pos
Chloe Rathbone-Whitlock chapter 7 . 4/13
I'm sorry... But your bella is a wimp, no fire in her! She just... I just can't like her, I've tried to but she is broken, she's need to fight back or atleast try to!
Guest chapter 59 . 3/24
Your story is incredible, I am totaly addicted!
steph A15 chapter 72 . 12/8/2014
I loved you're story it was amazing I want bored for a second while reading it and everything in this story was really original. The way that you described your characters and added pictures to the description was just amazing and not something that a lot of people do. You can tell that you put a lot of time and effort into the story and me like many other people appreciate all your hard work. I was so into the story that I didn't realize that I was reading the last chapter and when I saw that it was I was a little disappointed I feel like there were a lot of things still left unfinished so if it's not too much to ask I would really love if you wrote an epilogue just to tie up those loose strings and to give the story it's last happily ever after.
Bobbie Francies Reisen chapter 59 . 10/21/2014
Nice oibre go dtí seo . - Irish Gaelic
Nice works so far. - English
Annabanana94 chapter 3 . 10/10/2014
Ughh... To be such an advanced world technology wise, they are very far behind in the treatment to women. I would prefer if Alice and Bella were the same as Rosalie. For how things are developing right now, if they had a mind of their own, I would not see them together in a near future
StaceyC73 chapter 72 . 8/25/2014
I have read this story more than once and just keep coming back. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story.
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