|Reviews for I Should Probably Think Of Something Wittier|
| KittyMou chapter 1 . 2/8/2016
Write more ;- ; It is really well-written.
| blueravenchick chapter 1 . 8/19/2014
Ha! Poor Red Tornado! I wish he didn't stop them though :(
| NekoGrimalkin chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
Agh, what happens?! Update?! :D
| ivoryphox12 chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
Awww, I thought Red was gonna bust a move and tell Wally off. Or Bats coming and flipping out.
| xTammyVx chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
Wow. Just... wow. Loved it.
You have this really unique way of writing, where you set the scene and emotions and create a picture without going overboard.
| gigerisgod chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
Hi there! Loved this. being a little vague here and there works in its own way. writing good porn is hard. i get wanting to take it slow. but i'd like to read more, especially after Red throws Wally to the floor.
| darkhaze20 chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Wow. Haha, that was fantastic :D
You have a wonderful style of writing. Perfect, really. There are plenty of details, but you don't go overboard with bunches of unnecessary words. It's so much fun to read! Lol. Everything flows and your descriptions are just-GAH! So indescribably entertaing:P
And Wally and Dick's personalities were spot on. I swear it could have been a scene in the show(I wish). You must've been channeling their spirits 'cause it was soo THEM. Haha, I'm all giddy and tingly from reading this. There is absolutely nothing wrong with a little vagueness during the, uh, "dirty" scenes. Personally, I like it more when the participants' feelings and thoughts are described(like you did here) rather than straight up physical porn. That part is definitely hot, it's just 10x hotter to get inside their head while it's happening ;D You did a very sexy job with this story! I just hope Batman doesn't kill poor Wally, lol.
Thank you so much for sharing! You are a very talented writer, and I'm beyond happy you put your skills to use writing for this couple.
| Kalypso Fox chapter 1 . 3/17/2012
Fuck! Of course, right when Dick's about to give up his pride and give into his desires. To offer his "little Dick" to Wally! Ugh! Stupid Red Tornado; fucking ruined everything! xD
| One Who Waits For Love chapter 1 . 11/15/2011
It was going great until the damn clockblock, lol
silly red tornado hasn't learned to knock first
| Suna Kokaru chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
to be honest, I'm insanely shocked i read this. / i will never look at them the same, they will forever be a couple lol. besides that, i dont know how i stumbled upon this, and quite honestly i don't care. it was rather interesting to see the development of your writing and this little short -sexy but awesome -was well done. If i had enough confidence, i would write something like that, but i dont so im just gonna draw them i think XD. amazing write. fav author ever
| MyLittleBird chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
I've read some of the newer, fancier stories, but this is still one of my very favorite stories out here.
| OrangeSpiral chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
Very nice one shot :)but how can it end there? another chapter please?
| LaurynLou chapter 1 . 4/11/2011
Good job this was fantastic! Sad that this is only a one shot cause I would love a second chapter. One where maybe Red Tornado squeals on them and tells Bats. For your first 'smutty slash fic' you did really good! :D
| PenanceGirl chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
I loved it! This was suppperrrr cute! I like the fact that it was Red Tornado that walked in on them :) That was brilliant :) Anyways, keep 'em one shots comming :)
| RandomDraggon chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
YAY fellow wanabe pedos! Unite! XD