Reviews for A Switched Chance |
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JKR chapter 14 . 12/22/2023 Not impressed. I don't like any negative characterisations of Hermione even if you give her another name calling her Sky and gender bending her character. I don't think she deserved the scorn and derision she was treated with, nor did she deserve to be deprived of a loving family. Harry has always been quite selfish in addition to being a bad friend so at least his characterisation was true to cannon. I just found the whole story rather disappointing. I can never be bothered to read a story properly when it begins to become increasingly disappointing, ludicrous or unnecessarily cruel in it's characterisations and plot development. This seems like a grave misjustice to one of the stronger and better characters in the book. Yes Hermione has flaws. Yes she is stubborn. Yes she can occasionally be insensitive but I never characterised her as selfish or even remotely stupid. She is loyal and brave though. She could do with better friends. I don't like Harry in this even if he is pretending to be Hermione. I wish I could say I understand Harry's motives but I don't. The whole thing feels wrong. |
Anitaxp chapter 15 . 11/19/2023 What an incredible story! Very well executed too which makes it even better. Lots of things the concept can be good but the execution kinda ruins everything for me. However you were amazing! I was engrossed in the story all the time. Very deep emotions and situations that normally fanfics don’t touch which just made your story stand up. I truly hope you return to finish it because I’m intrigued on where this is going, but even if you don’t cone back I’m happy I got the chance to read this short part of your story. Thank you for sharing! |
Wiebenor chapter 15 . 9/14/2023 I haven't had the chance to log in yet since I reset my phone (it needed it I think), but thought I'd at least say that this story is thought provoking, so fay, yet, well... Let's just say I hope Harry and Hermione's predicament doesn't end like that cautionary tale told in the end about the 100 lives the couple lived... I don't get how NOT changing time is a bad thing overall, but I'm betting that the major events after 4th year might have something to do with that. That said, if this story continues, I hope it remains Harry/Hermione and, honestly, if Harry and Hermione er, depicted "exploring" their relationship, both with themselves, and each other, if that makes sense, that would be a welcome (not to mention kinky and erotic) distraction that I believe the characters could use... I mean, if I was inhabiting a girl's body, I would probably be fondling myself just to understand how a girl feels; y'know, the differences, and all. Maybe being a guy, that's only me that feels like thew would love to "feel", well, to "feel" ANYTHING for that matter, considering how "blah" my life feels... It's like, well, it's hard to explain. It's, I guess a bit of depression among other things, mixed with a feeling of, er, unfulfillment or something like (a longing perhaps?)... |
Kira the Spacebunny chapter 15 . 5/12/2023 A thoroughly enjoyable and intriguing story. The many AN's of apologies about how long it's been since the last update, (maybe not so) strangely give me hope that the story will one day be continued :) PS: It's stylistically satisfying that the story currently ends at a chapter discussing how time travel erases the future. Lol :D |
Light Lord Cybergate chapter 2 . 3/9/2023 Poor Hermione. One things for certain... after today Hermione (the real one) will never argue with Harry about his relatives ever again. Not sure if she can survive this... Unlike the real Harry she... or rather he is not used to such child abuse. She is either going to break... blow up the Dursleys... Or set all of the UKs police force after them... and maybe even the whole magical world as well depending on whether your Dumbles is an evil obliviating manipulator or not in this story. At least they haven't actually hit her... yet. I am literally expected Vernon to loose his cool at any moment and put her/him over his lap soon. |
Random Person chapter 15 . 1/17/2023 Sounds less like messing with time is wrong, and more someone cursed time travel because reasons. |
Ariel Schnee chapter 2 . 6/27/2022 If I was Hermione, I would have poisoned all their food. |
khatre chapter 15 . 6/6/2022 i was hoping for a happier last chapter but this was .. fairy tails are hard ..and sad .. |
khatre chapter 9 . 6/5/2022 All someone had to do was ask Snape "how many people and who have you used mind magics on at Hogwarts" cause you know this was NOT the first time it happened or even the hundredth... In real life we have one thing that is sacred to EVERYONE .. the Sanctity of Our Minds. Snape violated that and did it without a second thought. so Yes. It IS Rape. |
khatre chapter 9 . 6/5/2022 Ron is NOT entirely in the wrong here. Rude yes. Absolutely. But NOT wrong. proof? THE Best womens football players in the world get their stool pushed in by High School Boys teams ... Olympic Level Players! loose to high school boys ... Gold Medalists! In every other sport where people compete one on one and interact with each other Men DOMINATE Women ... |
chaoyue580966 chapter 15 . 5/29/2022 伟大的故事,希望有一天你能完成这个故事。 |
Weirpellet chapter 1 . 5/16/2022 I skim this story every once in awhile so it's nice to see that people are still coming by like I am and dropping a review. |
Same as Smithback chapter 15 . 5/10/2022 I re-read this magnificent story and I really enjoyed it again! 2017 is not so far, I hope to see this story again with a new chapter thanks, good luck, bye |
Michael chapter 15 . 3/13/2022 Hi Ich habe deine Geschichte hier gefunden. Die Kurzbeschreibung fand ich sehr interessant und so habe ich sie an diesem Wochenende gelesen. Leider hört sie mitten drin auf, was ich sehr schade finde. Ich würde mir wünschen, dass du die Geschichte weiterschreibst. Viele Grüße aus Deutschland Michael Hi I found your story here. I found the short description very interesting and so I read it this weekend. Unfortunately, she stops in the middle, which I think is a shame. I wish you would continue the story. Greetings from Germany Michael |
SunPho3n1x chapter 15 . 10/11/2021 This has been a great story. Thank you for writing this. |