I'm not going to lie, I kind of think Bella is a slut. She is a seventeen year old virgin then she hands it over to a guy she hasn't even known for twenty four hours. Yes, they met months ago but this is the first time they have spoken. I'm disappointed in her. I guess they haven't actually done the deed yet, we will see what happens next chapter.

It's so weird last chapter I was thrilled with the unspoken chemistry and want for each other. Now that they are talking so openly so quickly and all over each other I'm not sure what I think. Sometimes I think it's great, then creepy, then destined, then unrealistic, then perfect. I'm so confused.

I do love the fact that they have something they can understand about each other that nobody else can. They will either be really good for each other or really bad for each other.

Great job, I'm really intrigued.

I'm nervous about these two having a relationship based on their common suicide attempts. I do love the chemistry with these two. Their ability to let go of common sense and follow their instincts, to touch and to open up to each other. I am curious to see where this goes.

I'm pretty confident the meeting in the meadow will be with Edward. How Esme is going to get him to go and confide in Bella is beyond me.

I am thrilled with Bella's progress she is finally seeing things clearly.

I am so excited for her to have Angela. Angela is always a sweet heart in every story.

I am excited that the pace has picked up and I am really enjoying it.

Finally some real progress, I hope. Someone needs to take Lauren down. Great update.

So many thoughts for this chapter. First Lauren Mallory needs to be drop kicked. Second, I was so proud of Bella for blowing her off and not sinking to her level. Third, I'm so glad she decked her after that article. I would have done worse.

This chapter is so sad because there is such an epidemic of bullying going on in this country right now, and you know that so many kids go home and probably do the same thing that Bella is doing right now. It is so sad.

I know she isn't going to die since you have sixty four chapters and this is only chapter nine.

I am sure I am going to have to say poor Charlie again. He is going to be devistated.

Thanks for the not so happy update.

I loved their meeting! I love how close it is to the original series. I love the instant attraction. I love that they are both fighting it and in a strange way I love that Edward fled.

I have a question though, Bella says she's never been attracted to a man but the way she talks about what she wants to do to him sounds like a sexually experienced person. Has she slept around but not been in a relationship or is her talk just the thoughts of a hormonal teenager?

I love that they both have their escapes and sanctuaries. I wonder how Bella is going to go about enjoying her place of solitude if it is on the Cullen propterty?

Great update!

Hey its a story an awesome story that I love!

Thanks again as always.

Yeah, and here's Edward! I have to tell you dark and tortured Edward is one of my favorites. I don't know why but I love Edward not perfect. I'm glad Bella is making an effort to be nice to Charlie. Great chapter.

I still feel so sorry for Charlie. He's trying so hard. Any teenage girl having to uproot and live with a father she doesn't know would be difficult throw in losing a mom and it's the perfect storm. I am so excited that Edward is going to be introduced next chapter, I hope. Thanks for sharing your story.

After reading this chapter I understand Bella's thought process a little better. I can't say I fully agree but I get it. I can't believe she cut her hair off. I cringed while reading through the hair cutting process. I can only imagine how horrible it looked. I don't think that Charlie is going to freak out. When does Edward come into the picture?

Wow, I am impressed that you were posting a chapter a day. I struggle to post one a week. I am glad that Bella opened up to Esme, it is the first step right? It was a little repetative reading about the accident again in only four chapters but it was nice to have Bella's feelings and reflection on that day too. Good job.

Charlie is such an amazing father. He did the exactly what he should have. Right before I read the part where Charlie set up the appointment with Esme, I was thinking this girl is going to need professional help. I love that you kept the Cullen family the same as in the original books. I am excited to see where this goes.

Loved it! Thanks for the update. I am glad Bella and Lauren were able to make peace. I cannot wait for their alone time and for the wedding! Update soon, please! :-)

i hope that everything continues smoothly for the lovely couple!