That was amazing! Wow is right! I loved the look into Edward's mind. I am dying to know what happened to him! When these two finally talk it is going to be electric! I can't wait! I love that Bella has the meadow and Edward the lighthouse! That's amazing...I wonder if either of them will ever let teh other into their special place!

Great job! I'm addicted!

OMG! He sounds amazing! I wonder why he's so shy? Will we see into his mind, or will we have to figure it out with Bella? Esme sounds amazing! I'm so excited to see what happens next! Great job!

Okay, that was good! You can that Bella is trying to stay angry and guilty, but a part of her is trying to heal, even though she is fighting it. You've done a really great job. I'm very excited for the BBQ!

Really good! Update soon :)

Aww! That is so sad. I completely understand why she did that. Her hair was something thatmade her and her mom happy! I don't think Charlie will be mad, I think he'll be sad...but, we'll see...off to read Chapter six! Great job!

That was amazing! My favorite part is the view point you wirte in...I love how it switches and almost feels like a third person as well! And it flows so well! I love it! Off to the next one!

Really good chapter. Update soon :)

please update soon :)

Oh, wow! The way you ended that has me wanting more right away. You are incredible at describing emotions!

And, like Bella...I want to hear more about the Cullen family!

Great job, yet again!

Really good so far. Please update soon :)

Amazing, again! I was captivated by every word!

I almost lost it when Charlie recounted how the last time he had seen Bella was as a baby with big, brown eyes.

You already have me emotionally invested!

Great job!

That is gorgeous! I smiled with her at the end of the chapter! Beautiful work...off to the next chapter...