| Reviews for The Lighthouse |
|---|
   blb1000 chapter 6 . 11/23/2013 I'm going to guess that either Rose or Alice will fix her hair. |
| blb1000 chapter 3 . 11/23/2013 Good diversion attempt there. |
| blb1000 chapter 1 . 11/23/2013 Oh good. Sounds like an HEA! |
| maggiegurle chapter 73 . 7/25/2013 Great story! Really enjoyed it! Thank you! :o) |
| Godschildtweety chapter 73 . 5/12/2012 Really good |
| Crazybee3 chapter 73 . 10/29/2011 That was great ! Thanks :) |
| Breaking Dawn21 chapter 72 . 10/8/2011 Enjoyed reading good job |
| StupidLambTanya chapter 1 . 9/16/2011 What a fantastic story, I really loved it! Thank you for writing it! |
| TwiAggie94 chapter 73 . 9/15/2011 Incredible story. Loved all the POVs and details. Meg |
| TwiAggie94 chapter 15 . 9/13/2011 Sweet but so not safe sex. Lol |
| Breaking Dawn21 chapter 73 . 9/13/2011 Enjoyed reading |
| MrsPeachesK chapter 73 . 9/11/2011 GREAT CHAPTER! I finally got my account to work and now i can read and review! This was a great story and i really enjoyed reading it! AWWWWWW! They had a cute little family! Glad that james was found guilty. |
| Robstenvampgirl chapter 73 . 9/6/2011 you're an amazing author Sally! |
| Zpower21 chapter 49 . 9/5/2011 Ok, so I really have to say this because it has now chewed through my very last nerve... I honestly thought that you were only doing it for important scenes at first. Then you just kept doing it for almost EVERY scene, sometimes from three different POV's. If you want people to know every detail from every character than you should write from the omniscient POV. There are plenty of ways to do it without giving your plot away. A good story to look at is The Fan. No longer on this site, though it can still be found. I believe this to be a good possibility as to why your story is not getting a lot of reviews. Also, you have repeated characters twice already. Jessica Stanley was the girl that died giving Edward road head AND the vapid minion to Lauren. Sam Uley is not only the lighthouse keeper but Charlie's deputy. They are not the same person because you stated that Port Townsend is two hours away! Also the timeline seems so verydistorted to me. It feels like everything could have easily happened over weeks even months rather than days. Too much too fast, if you will. I still stand by my belief that the premise of the story is a good one, though everything is about the physical because of the timeline. This is more about new lust than about new live because everything is so packed together. All of this has happened in less than a week! ~Z~ |
| Zpower21 chapter 35 . 9/5/2011 WOW! My guess is James. But who knows if Lauren might be in on it as well. I like that the "wolf pack" seems to be the good guys here, being police officers and all. ~Z~ |