|Reviews for Introductions and Discoveries|
| ibukiclan chapter 5 . 1/7
for a moment i thought of spyro when ka said 'whoosh flame city'
| Light Seeker 001 chapter 8 . 3/3/2014
I thought the tree shaman was turned into a sheep?
| Light Seeker 001 chapter 11 . 3/3/2014
I hope the next chapter will be as exciting. I haven't seen that many Tak Juju stories. This one is pretty good.
| AquaMoonlight chapter 2 . 7/26/2011
Good job on the second chapter ! :D Even tough Tak is the hero of the story, he is still just a kid. That dosen't stop him to be a little afraid of a few things. I found that very cute.
I be waiting the next chapter then.
| AquaMoonlight chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
Nice start ! n_n But since Tak is the main character, the story had to be more focused on him.
Don't be afraid to add new scenes and dialogues, it's YOUR version of the first game after all. n_n
I don't say that to critiquize you, i just want to help you make your story even more interesting.
I think i said everything ! I can't wait to read the nexts chapters.
Don't be afraid to talk to me about the games or other stuff ;)Tak fans are quite rare theses days XD