Reviews for The Favor
Fayre Eferhild di Rozalia chapter 8 . 11/2/2015
I want more! Love the chapter :D
ArigatoLiz chapter 2 . 10/19/2015
Oh, gosh! I have a terrible feeling. The history is not complete!
Great chapter, anyway.
ArigatoLiz chapter 1 . 10/19/2015
Kya! I like Azuma! Ahhhhh... I love this story. Great chapter. I hope that you can finished. Because is great.
Toastiness98 chapter 8 . 4/4/2014
I'd really love to read more.:。(ノ)ノ゚.:。
moot3100 chapter 3 . 3/19/2013
We're learning about mutualism in Science...XD Love it!
Kyouka Setsura chapter 8 . 3/16/2013
oh's a what should i say?oh's a good,great,oh well continue!
onliafaze chapter 6 . 10/25/2012
Reading over your fanfic again, I really want to know, did Azuma change Kahoko? I really hope not, cuz that's just low.
onliafaze chapter 8 . 9/14/2012
I'm glad someone other than Kahoko realizes how out of hand the situation is getting. Lies, among other things, are like snow. It just keeps piling up until you're buried. I do wonder how they'll handle this mess. Hmm... I have A idea. If you're interested, let me know.
Awesomeness02 chapter 8 . 9/14/2012
It's going good!
Keep it up :)
onliafaze chapter 7 . 8/26/2012
... This fic... Is starting to irritate me. I'll start with the major flaw: Kahoko is not smart enough for Tokyo University. Azuma, her tutor, firsthand witness to her average level of intelligence... Is offering her into Japans most prestigious school. Does not make sense. Also... why on earth is Kyoko putting up with his crap? Lying about her family and who she truly is?... I really liked this fic and I still want to see how this ends. But a weak female lead and a relationship built with lies are two of my major pet peeves.
Awesomeness02 chapter 7 . 8/26/2012
Yay! Finally an update!
Nice chapter, can't wait for the next
Rhien Meoita chapter 6 . 12/24/2011
Haha, good job on the new chapters! I had tons of fun reading them. And gosh, the upper-class are just full of wolves hidden in sheep's clothing, isn't it. I can't say I am surprised tho... :P guess it's expected.

Although there were some errors with the verb tenses, I thoroughly enjoyed reading these new chapters (I have been horrible with catching up to the story updates in my inbox...) and can't wait to see more of it!

And Kaji Aoi's coming in, huh. Just a in-case-you-don't-know and I am prob gonna sound like a fool if you already know it, but Kaji's from the upper class too and his family can be on par with Azuma's family, I believe. To my knowledge, his grandfather wants him to be a doctor and his family owns a (or several) hospital(s), but Kaji has more freedom than Azuma, if my knowledge isn't mistaken. However, this is your story, so you can do whatever you want. :)

I can't wait to see what happens next~ I enjoyed watching Azuma panic and be desperate. :3 I'm glad Kahoko's safe tho... Those 'thugs' (the four boys) are prob hired/blackmailed by Ayano... She really is willing to go to any strength for Azuma, huh. Wonder how she'll react when she finds out Azuma's dual personality... I hope Kahoko's viOlin will return to her soon... I would hate for her to lose it...

Well, anyways, thank you very much for all of your hard work and I hope I can see the next chapter up soon! Good job! You did fabulous! Until next time~

Best wishes always,


P.S. I hope this long review will make up for my absence!
aleisa013 chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
i think you got it wrong. if ayano is 16 and she's one year younger than azuma then azuma is 17 and that will make him in the same age group with kahoko, len and ryoutaro. he should be 18. aside from this error, you are good at portraying azuma's character but then.. ayano should be elegant and desperate but in this fic you just made her desperate. she is still from a respectable family, a filthy rich one at that... i thought the yumokis are richer than the takashinas...(just saying)...

be inspired from the opinions to make your fics better...

being a good author will not be achieved without critics to point out mistakes so that the author can improve his/her work...
Angela Vu chapter 6 . 8/31/2011
Interesting... making Kahoko think that Azuma undressed naughty of him, but seriously hilarious as well, to think that most likely Miyabi undressed her... *evil laugh*
L'archangel chapter 6 . 7/9/2011


How sweet of Azuma to care that much to Kaho...

I would be looking forward on your updates, wondering how things will get between these two.
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