Reviews for Turning Point
skylarenderbrine chapter 4 . 6/2/2019
Siriusbeing spoopy to Cedric*
Harry: oh its fine he's just bored and he's innocent
MattKennedy chapter 4 . 1/11/2017
Poor Cedric getting terrorized by Sirius! Love how cute he and Harry are together though. :) Hope you continue this sometime!
GallagherGirl537 chapter 4 . 1/18/2016
This is so great! please write more soon!
Brit8889 chapter 4 . 11/14/2015
Good story. Did you abandon this story?
harrynginnyinatree chapter 4 . 3/5/2015
I hope you've not abandoned this story. It's pretty good so far, but we're not very far into it yet. I'd love to see it continued.
Onlyabrit chapter 3 . 12/21/2014
Hi, This is a interesting story. Are you still updating it? if not it's a pity as it has good foundation of a good story.
DemeRain chapter 4 . 9/26/2014
Thanks for sharing.
jb kjhbihbnin chapter 4 . 4/2/2014
interesting stoy, will harry and cedric go together at the yule ball? will cedric live? will they bond? will harry be pregnant? please continue
Heidi'sWildFire chapter 4 . 12/17/2013
Ho ho, there was drama! Man I need to read the book's. What was the story about the Shrieking Shack and Professor Lupin person? Also, why isn't Harry worried about Sirius Black? I've heard the name before, but I don't remeber all the story? Is he the guy that gave Harry his scar? If he is, then I thought Harry was very scared of that guy and has to fight him alot? Are you shaking your head at me again, for my lack of knowledge about this? Well I would be too, if I were you. Can I be you? Your so cool. *giggle*

Yup! I'm satisfied with my decision on making Harry the girl. He turned into a girl for a moment with the pocking Cedric thing over and over. Don't get me wrong, it was cute and funny, especially with Cedric being lightly annoied. You played the part off really great as your always do. But Harry is now totally the girl. *looking sheepish at you, after my confident rant* :)

This was a very well done and fun chapter. Well all your chapter's have been very well done. You are a great writer and stop shaking your head. You are awesome! Stop that head NOW! ADMIT IT! You! Are! A! Great! W!R!I!T!E!R! I'm watching you long lady... *lefts head and piers down suspiciously at you* :)

What's up with the "next chapter that will not take me as long to write… hopefully." stuff? It's only been a year and eight months...not that long...LOL. You are far to cute! You got scared right? Next chapter you were planning to start the romance that you thought you where ready to write and face...but you got nerves alittle huh? I would totally. (I'm not much help at all, am I?) *giggle* Ah! I have to tease you, that's my bestfriend job. It's in the contract. Sorry, that's how it is. I'm not trying to make you cry, but there are times when a firmer hand is needed...And now is that time! Bend over.. ***BIG UNCONTROLED GIGGLE*** Do you love me yet?.. :D
Heidi'sWildFire chapter 3 . 12/17/2013
Chapter 3. Here is starts. *giggle* No, you did a good job. :D I just have to picture really hard that Harry is a girl. I was going to think of Cedric as it, but... Cedric keeps talking about Harry being so small and fragile, so I couldn't help it.. *ducks head and shields it with my arms*-Don't hate me. :D I'm sure your shaking your head at me. :) *giggle* I do think it's good that you are progressing the story like this, alittle bit more each time. Even though Cedric has grown feeling for Harry, he is still holding that back and just being there for him and a friend that Harry so desperately needs. Oh yeah, I thought it was so cute when Harry wanted to bring his Neville along and Cedric had to fight back disappointment. Cute! Are you making him get nerveous about a possible love triangle? He could worry about it alot and Harry would have no clue. Not that I'm thinking about it, that would be totally funny and cool! Anyway's, can't put my own idea's into the story. *giggle* :D I had fun, and sorry that I am making Harry a girl.. *snicker*
Heidi'sWildFire chapter 2 . 12/17/2013
Chapter 2: That was very sweet. Cedric really is taking a kind interest in Harry as a new friend. That sounds like that's something Harry really needs right now. I was left with sweet peaceful feeling after I had finished this chapter. Good job! :D
Heidi'sWildFire chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
I read it, well the first chapter so far. I've tried, but I'm just not into yaoi, less so now that I found out that putting kids like 12 and 13 with adults was popular. But besides the child molestation part, I'm fine with others being into guy on guy story's. I wanted to read your story, no matter what I'm into.
It's really good so far. You are a great writer, you know that? Really good. I didn't know that the Twilight guy was Cedric. I didn't even know much about the Cedric character, excepted I remember seeing him die in the movie? But you are making him sound good on here. He seems to play off of Harry really well. I enjoyed their bantering between each other and Harry's suspicion. I like that you didn't just jump right into a relationship yet and instead you are building it up slowly. With this type of same sex story from normally straight characters, it will hopefully make it more believable that their preference could turn to each other, with building it up slowly. I'll read more later when I get more time. You've made me interested in what will happen next? :) Silly talented girl. :D
Guest chapter 4 . 11/5/2013
can u please please please hurry up and write some more of this story cus it is very good and interesting and i really want 2 know what is going 2 happen next
YenGirl chapter 3 . 7/10/2013
Not to worry, you do have character development here :)

I'm glad Harry had restful sleep at last... and it does make sense that with his crazy life, that rest came with lying on the ground of a magical garden with a newly made friend beside him! *holds quill posed over parchment and cocks head at Harry, hoping for directions to the same lovely place* I could definitely do with a good many hours of sleep in such a lovely place!

Oooh... Hermione is annoying here (the sky is falling!) and I understand how annoying her questions are... but I still hope the trio will get together soon. At least, Neville is helpful! *grins at him*

And Jason is such a good friend too! *turns her grin onto him* So Cedric is unsubtle, most certified-ly (is this a word? I think it is) gay and smitten with Harry. Now I have a funny thought about Jason and Neville... must be my active imagination? :)

Nothing like a midnight conversation - I liked how Cedric was lost in Harry... and panicking about Harry... and how calm Harry was, unlike canon. So they gave each other their solutions, that was cute!

Harry He has a hidden strength here which I like very much indeed (can't wait for him to show it in fact) - poor boy was panicking so much in canon! Wow, the moment that he does show it... it's gonna be awesome!

This chapter could do with a couple of line separators... but it was good :D
YenGirl chapter 2 . 7/2/2013
Ah, Cedric really does personify the House of Hufflepuff. *another sage nod* I'm glad he had that meeting and stated his opinion about Harry well without shoving it down his housemates' throats. Well done, Cedric!

I'm also glad that Harry went to search out Flitwick to confirm what Cedric told him. He may be a Gryffindor but he isn't stupid. Good for him!

I do feel a twinge in my heart though, at how annoying Harry found Hermione. I've always preferred stories where the Golden Trio stay together... hopefully, they will by story's end.

The magical courtyard sounded lovely and the story was sweet. Harry does trust Cedric, doesn't he? Otherwise he would never have let his guard down enough to fall asleep like that *smiles* And Cedric's musings on his new friend sound promising... very promising indeed!

By the way, certain terms should be Title Cased such as 'Quidditch' and 'Boy-Who-Lived' :) And a separator or line break would be good for scene changes :)

Other than that, it was an enjoyable read!
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