|Reviews for Not What it Appears to Be|
| MomoPeachFlower chapter 18 . 12/12/2016
I was hoping for one last moment with Lucy at the end there, but otherwise I absolutely loved it.
| Vicky Tzalachani chapter 18 . 3/16/2016
That storyline and story itself was amazing! I can't describe how much I liked it! Well done!
| Hailey chapter 18 . 12/23/2013
I really like the story at the beginning. but I don't like how Koy and Lucy got over their rivalry so quickly! it would be more interesting if they kept that! and how Lucy HEARD edmund and jades saying he secretly loved Koy but didn't do anything about it
| anushka chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
| Dark Moon Maiden chapter 18 . 3/4/2011
I liked the story but theending not so much I think it was kind of unfair to Lucy because he's still thinking about koy, I think that was kind of sad for Lucy :(
But still I think your story was really good and I liked it
| PewpewDiePie chapter 18 . 2/26/2011
naww I absolutely loved it! So glad you wrote this . like I heart you so bad you sexy beast ;P
| SiempreCrystalClear chapter 18 . 2/26/2011
Mr. Tumnus! Yay!:D great way to end it Chica, I loved this last chapter! great way to end it... or great way to start another ;)
| Nimbus Llewelyn chapter 18 . 2/25/2011
Not bad, not bad at all.
| Rpattzluver4everhotmail.com chapter 17 . 2/25/2011
Awesome chapter Hun! :) loved it!
| Nimbus Llewelyn chapter 17 . 2/25/2011
Interesting as usual if a tad cliche.
| Nimbus Llewelyn chapter 16 . 2/23/2011
Interesting though the chapters are very short.
| SiempreCrystalClear chapter 16 . 2/22/2011
Awesome chap! :D and Lucy finally found out... :D muaha. Lol, no, ok maybe not like that. But still :P I'll shut up now. Great, Chica
| kelseyelizabethxo chapter 15 . 2/22/2011
i dont like koy. she's a bitch.
| Dark Moon Maiden chapter 15 . 2/21/2011
I don't like koyuki that can't be toguether, what about lucy? That's unfair (sulks in a corner) please update soon
| SiempreCrystalClear chapter 15 . 2/21/2011
Awesome chapter! Koy and Lucy finally meet :) yay! loved the making of the shelter part and the dream :D