|Reviews for Lynchpin|
| Galisaa chapter 1 . 1/9
Dark, truly unnerving. To... consed a simple death for Naruto is unimaginable to me before today.
| swane1990 chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
Loved the end :D
| X-elemental chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
I have yet to read a single fic that has this mistake happening in which Naruto does not die.
| hanife2 chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
Good fic. Loved it. But also a bit creepy because it could have happened. And I don't even want to think about how, at that point in Naruto's life, his disappearance would have only meant "good riddance".
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
Sink-or-swim is one thing. Jiraiya's so-called teaching methods are another.
| Orange Spiral 62 chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
Hilarious. Totally loved it. :)
| Ben chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
Nice... Well bloody not nice but you know what I mean, I like how the summoning Justus always involves hitting the floor (like most doton jutsu) except for this one time naruto summons in mid air... I like your way
| Rake1810 chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
I kind of wish you added a paragraph about Jiraiya but great one-shot.
| Aern chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
Nice story, its morbidly realistic and provides a great and plausible alternative to what happened in canon but none the less still very interesting!
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
Any story in which the murder of the protagonist solves the problem seems intrinsically flawed.
Hilarious, in this case, but flawed.
| thelegendarysupernerd chapter 1 . 1/23/2012
Holy Crap! Awesome. What a story.
| KashikoiNekoHu chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
this is just a comment
not a witty rant
I think this should grow
cool story bro
| Akuma-Heika chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
hahahhaha dark but realistic. canon has retconned things so much it is hard to say one war or another how things are supposed to work.
| riayi chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
Oh, Jiraiya, you so crazy...
Also, the Madara scene was hilarious beyond belief.
| OokamiJudge chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
Well it was a different take I'll give you that, but it would have been nice to know that it contained character death.