Reviews for Fix You
tau.soul chapter 25 . 3/15
One thing you can do to make your dialogue more organized and less confusing is to pair people's actions with their dialogue. So if Kyoya is going to grin lecherously, have that in the same paragraph as his following dialogue. You can have an action stated before the words. Also, try to keep a character's dialogue in the same paragraph. It's okay to split it up sometimes for "dramatic effect," but if you do it too often it feels like you switched characters. It's really good, though. I love it
Lb chapter 12 . 12/20/2014
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Guest chapter 13 . 12/13/2014
Mother of gods
Guest chapter 4 . 9/1/2014
I love this side of kyouya so gental not shadow kingish at all
Guest chapter 27 . 6/21/2014
Hahaha I bet he's really sore and everyone would be like- Why are you walking so weirdly? Or the people who figure it out would be like...Mhmmmm, I see. ;)
crazydumdum chapter 27 . 1/3/2014
OMG I can't believe this story is over. I am so in love with it. Every time you kept saying that chapters were bad I wanted to smack you upside the head because they were all so amazing! Please, don't stop writing!
LawlietL.Ryuzai chapter 27 . 7/30/2013
I loved your story, from beginning to end. From every paragraph to every chapter. You wrote a real work of art, no matter what you otherwise think. I hope you can own OHSHC in the future so that all your words can come to life. I look forward to your work that I'll surely read in the future. _
guest chapter 27 . 7/23/2013
great story! :) i have and account but im too lazy to log in :)
Guest chapter 27 . 7/23/2013
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write a Mori / Hunny accompaniment to this. Where it tells what they did when they went to the hotel *wink* . Please do more kyoya kaoru fics
wolfluver chapter 23 . 7/1/2013
roy/ed or yuki/kyo
nightrader1234 chapter 27 . 4/29/2013
Sex between Kyoya and Tamiki Fucking reading this shit. Sex between a ginger twin and Kyoya temoted but yah know Kyoya and Tamiki 3 A threesome between a ginger cat like twin Kyoya and Tamiki Nose bleed and Yaoi fangirl squel. SERIOUSLY LOVE IT
nightrader1234 chapter 7 . 4/28/2013
I WANT MAH COOKIE I really love those things. Hikaru is being a pain in the ass T_T WHY HIKARU WHYYY

great story IM HOOKED
Kat chapter 27 . 3/20/2013
I read all of this in one night. This wad amazing ;-; I fangirled...SO HARD. ;; -quietly continues to fangirl -
Guest chapter 27 . 3/13/2013
Oh my god i loved it it wasnt that bad at all
LaverdaHarleyIndian chapter 27 . 2/18/2013
WOW! Just... Wow. Gosh I hope there's a sequel...
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