Reviews for More Than Meets the Eye: Amok Time for America
LoveSasuSakuFanfics chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
LOLOLOL "You're either lying or stupid" "...I'm stupid"
florescentdingo chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
Somehow...all of this made sense to me in a way...AND I'VE NEVER EVEN SEEN TRANSFORMERS! The end was so hot and hilarious. The mental image of the bosses walking in just as America went down on Matty was just too much. I almost got busted by my mom for laughing so hard.

It's obviously an old fiction, but I hope that tons of other people read this, because I know it made my LIFE.

And oh my god, just...just never EVER delete this, okay?
Jake chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
Hooooly shit... I've read this like four fricking times and I still laugh and die from the humor/sexiness. Ah, not to mention I love Al getting a stiffy from Mattie being in character with Starscream. Just major lols all around for that. I don't know if I cheered more during their battle scene of the ending with the bosses walking in. And I have no sympathy for the bosses whatsoever, they shoulda checked the camera first. :) You're a genius. Love you forever for this fic.

GreyMoth chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
An old fic, I see, but omg, funniest yet hottest smut scene I have ever read. It deserves more reviews
koosei chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
Oh My God. Just ... WOW. I don't even LIKE Transformers, but This! This was hilarious and genius, and so freaking hot I don't care that I didn't get most of the in-jokes! :D And Al as a cosplay-nut and with the cosplay!kink only makes it SO MUCH BETTER! :D ~off to re-read!~

Hanari502 chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
This is just absolutely fantastic. I'm not a huge fan of slash/Yaoi but just the way you portrayed them, in a convention setting nonetheless, is just spectacular. The title interested me. Transformers and all...blame the movies and the cartoon on that one.

Coming from someone who would like to believe she has some experience writing (I'm alright..I'm not amazing or anything) this is incredibly well written. The dialogue and the quick thought-speech-thought-ohmygod intervals are entertaining and they seriously had me giggling at times.

All in all this was wonderfully written. You have a gift..seriously. I can only guess you either took forever to write this, or you drawled it all out in one shot.

Either way this is awesome. I'm glad I wasted an hour or so to read it xD.
Mochacha chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
That is possibly the geekiest thing I have ever laid witness to... AND I UNDERSTOOD IT ALL. O_O God, I just love you for this. Like... no lie.
GilbertOfPrussia chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
...holy shit.

I don't know what I love more- all the comic references (Fuck, I'm a huge nerd~) this pairing, or YOU. ;_; This is just...just...

UNF. Owo This is wonderful. I'm home sick, and baby, I think you just made my temperature rise~

Hahaha, just kidding, of course~ But mein gott, this is amazing~ And I love the ending. Oh, I feel sorry for their bosses, the damn homophobes~

...okay, maybe just a LITTLE sorry. :P Hm, do I sound incomprehensible, by any chance~? Yeahhh, there's probably a good reason for that...our wedding reception will be on February 14th, yes~?

Hope your review count hits over 9,000, because you definetly deserve it!
Yoru Hana1 chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
*starts laughing uproariously* I'd probably be one of the ones chearing them on, most likly from a good vantage point behind something solid (not that would probably help).