Reviews for Five Times John Watson Remained Oblivious |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent. Really excellent. Could be longer, actually. I think you could expand the scenes without too much work. Though it is lovely just as it is. |
![]() ![]() Cute but he don't need no girlfriend O_O |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very cute! Your writing style held my attention beautifully. I'll be checking out more of your work. Thank you for writing this, darling! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I almost cried at that last part. no joke. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahahaha...good story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL! I love how John just goes with the flow there at the end, and I thought you wrote both John's and Sherlock's personalities really well! :) Are you planning on writing another story where other people realize that Sherlock and John are together?...Or maybe one where they get their suspicions confirmed? LOL, please keep up the excellent work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good one-shot, though I'm a little disgruntled that John is going to continue looking for a girlfriend. / |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it so sweet |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really cute and funny, I kind of like these "five times that _ and one time it didn't" they're usually really cute :D You did a good job with this |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this, it was nicely written and flowed well. I like the idea of John asserting his choices ('I'm not giving up on a girlfriend') but can't help but think he'll find that slightly more difficult from here on! Pip. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not into slash, but this was so freaking cute! "I'm not giving up on getting a girlfriend" that cracked me up, the whole thing was just... well, nice and warm and fuzzy, i didn't really care for the pairing, and "so - How long have we been together?" made me smile hugely, that just warmed my heart for the rest of the daay, thank you! P.S. Love you disclaimer even though i disagree with it XD |