|Reviews for Bella's Suicide New Moon AU|
| Guest chapter 12 . 1h ago
I adore you for this distinction:
It was very similar to Carlisle's mix of emotion, though not as intense or rich. It didn't have the same depth. Charlie truly loved his daughter, but it was a fairly abstract love. He had hardly spent any time with her at all in her seventeen years of life and didn't really know her. He loved her because she was his daughter, not because she was Bella, whereas my family had come to love her for herself and welcomed her into our family, giving her the appropriate titles, like daughter and sister, accordingly. So while Charlie loved her because she was his daughter, she was Carlisle's daughter because he loved her. Charlie would have loved her just as much even if she was just like Jessica, whereas if she was like Jessica, she never would have become part of our family. It was a different kind of love they each offered, though both considered her a daughter, and both types of paternal love, represented by the two men, were good and right in their own way.
| Guest chapter 9 . 2h ago
Are you sure Bella is in the rest of this story? Like really REALLY sure? Cause right now it's all Cullens all the time. I'm glad you've made Alice 'just' selfish and not evil, at least, not yet.
| Guest chapter 8 . 2h ago
I love how all this is working out, but if you had to write this story all over again, I'd do all this part THEN show Bella deciding to off herself.
| Guest chapter 7 . 3h ago
When you have to beg people to stay with your story because even YOU know you're taking too long, you might want to consider FIXING THE PROBLEM.
| Guest chapter 6 . 3h ago
Yes, you WOULD be pro spouse abuse:
"Acting purely on instinct, the Major pounced on Alice, knocking her to the ground."
"...from where I had her pinned on the ground"
| Guest chapter 5 . 3h ago
If you don't want your readers to be offended, then don't write offensive shit.
Your "...why female vampires were all submissive to their mates out in the real vampire world..." and "...like a good little mate should." bullshit make me wonder just what all you DO have against women.
| kantorkan chapter 22 . 3/8
Wonder how long it is before slow poke Jasper figures out that they are Mates? and how much grief will he be getting from the rest.
| kantorkan chapter 21 . 3/8
So is this where Emo Eddie goes to the Volturi and tattles on them about having an" immortal child"?
| lizard84 chapter 26 . 3/4
Way to go Charlie!
| Terra Elizabeth chapter 1 . 2/7
| jlove34 chapter 66 . 2/3
Damn. That was good story. Eddie and Alice's "enhancement" scene was epic. I laughed so hard I almost peed my pants!
| Guest chapter 58 . 2/2
Awww, the revolving soul theory was a great touch!
| Guest chapter 55 . 2/2
Never apologize for how you construct your story, and especially not when it's going so well.
| Guest chapter 53 . 2/2
Fred and Alistair? Ok, I officially love you. That was awesome! Love how JasPurrr calls Bella Colonel, too cute! And GO FATE!
| Guest chapter 51 . 2/2
(The clinical sex scene sort of reads like you're a middle school sex-ed teacher. You're too busy trying to use the correct word to actually get into the groove. Suggestion for your next lemon? Let loose and go more with the flow. DON'T be so worried about using exact names for body parts. "He parted her labia." Wow. "He stroked his fingers through her moisture then parted her lips." Which would you prefer to read?)