Not sure if you still read reviews after…oh geez 12 years. But just wanted to say that was awesome! Very exciting and the prose was quite good. Only thing I’d say is I’d have loved a deeper dig into the emotions of these charged situations but things also worked well in your more removed style. Awesome job! I hope you’re still writing.

thank you so much for sharing! I had a blast teading all this 3

good lord! well, at least theyll be a family now 3

Starfire the woman you are, I understand why Richard fell for you

Galfore

again, the gasp i gusped. then Richard was lying when be said he didnt understand the Tamaran that Kessa’D and Star spoke while the video feed was off?

the gasp i just let out…

GASP im so ready to read Kessa’d getting his butt kicked

I KNEW IT I KNEW HE WAS TOO GOOD TO BE TRUEEE OOHH KESSA’D YOU WICKED MAN! Galfore is 100% right too, hes a coward for challenging Star in her delicate state. I NEED A REMATCH NOW

oh dear… Mar’i Grayson heyyyy girl

RICHARD JOHN GRAYSON WHY ARE YOU A CHORNIC FUMBLER

Awesome story! Thanks for sharing!

Well, that was intense. Your writing is amazing.
The end kinda hurts me but it leaves space for the sequel.
Throughout the story, I was so fearful Starfire was gonna die, but she survived and I was so thankful you didn't kill her off. The love story between Grayson and Starfire is so beautiful. Great job!

THE FEEELS! IM DYING INSIDE!

THAT WAS SO GREAT