Reviews for Guardian
cosette141 chapter 3 . 1/21
Finish this! Pretty please?
Jesco0307 chapter 3 . 2/10/2011
I am really curious about the relationship between Eliot and Alyssa - my bet is sister. Loved Nate's evaluation of her at the end - as he wished he wouldn't have blocked the punch and let her fix the wall instead. Nice one.

Can't wait for the rescue and the explanation why the guy wanted Alyssa.

Keep it coming, please.
saides chapter 3 . 2/9/2011
Great chapter. Thanks for including Eliot in this one. You know we Kaniacs have to stick together!

Keep it coming, it's great so far.


Socialoutcastwinneroftheyear chapter 3 . 2/9/2011
Good chapter cant wait for more. Both my parents worked in emergency medicine. Cant wait for more!

Socialoutcastwinneroftheyear chapter 2 . 2/1/2011
I like Alyssa im still trying to figure out the relation between her and Eliot though. Is she possibly Eliots sister?

Jenn11 chapter 2 . 1/31/2011
Very nice chapter.

He crossed his arms and tried to look menacing. And of course, failed. - LOL! Nope. Being menacing is Eliot's job, not Hardison's...

She took a step forward toward Hardison when Parker stepped over in front of her. "Did you hurt Eliot?"

- Love how protective Parker is of Eliot.

Eliot is the best in the business, would you agree?"

"Of course he is!" - Yep. Of course he is! :-)

"Okay, if you know Eliot, what's going to be harder on him? What they're doing to him now, or being forced to watch while they do it to you or us?"

So very, very true. You have everyone totally in character. Looking forward ot the next chapter.
saides chapter 2 . 1/31/2011
Yay! "Lets re-steal Eliot." Love it!

Keep it coming and thanks,

Belladhanna chapter 2 . 1/30/2011
Very interesting start. I'm enjoying this. Cant wait to find out more about Alyssa.
Socialoutcastwinneroftheyear chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
Good job so far i liked the ending with Parker cant wait for more! Hey i have a story in the works called Love is never easy for a conman, could you stop by and let mnow what you think? Thanks,

saides chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
Fabulous start, and hysterically funny ending.

Keep it coming, please.


Nyu1204 chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
keep it up
Jenn11 chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
Interesting start. Looking forward to the next chapter. Love the knot Eliot tied of Parker. clever.
Ella-Olivia chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
Interesting start. I love Parker in this! Please continue!