|Reviews for How Eclipse Should Have Been|
| JaliceFan66Gabbyhaley111 chapter 3 . 6/9/2011
No! Not Jasper! *Snarls and tries to kill Edward*
(I'm 100% Team Jasper)
| SkittlesandIceCream chapter 12 . 6/8/2011
Aww that's so sad! I love Alice... Well, I don't care much for Bella, but I really hate Edward... *growls* He deserved to die after killing Jazzy!
(In case you haven't noticed, I love everyone but Edward and Bella...)
| Moon Shawdow's Saint chapter 12 . 6/5/2011
So... did edward die? cause now im sort of thinking that dieing would be letting him off easy. so, did they just leave him there? did they kill him? edward is an asshole too. so they should cut off a part of him and put it in his mouth. then, put a drop of human blood in his mouth evry 11 months. THEN kill him!
| Moon Shawdow's Saint chapter 11 . 6/5/2011
HE DIDNT DIE? NOW I SIMPLAY MUST READ ON
| Moon Shawdow's Saint chapter 10 . 6/5/2011
kill him! KILL HIM! BOBBIT HIM! RIP HIS NOT BEATING HEART OUT AND SHOW IT TO HIM!
| Moon Shawdow's Saint chapter 5 . 6/5/2011
that egotistical bastard
| Moon Shawdow's Saint chapter 3 . 6/5/2011
ok that was wrong. im all for eddy being a luney, but jasper? as team-jasper rep., i am hurt
| Kassandra203 chapter 12 . 6/5/2011
Good chapters :) I'm glad Edward died, such a jerk lol
| lost in a musical daydream chapter 12 . 6/5/2011
I hate Edward! DIE!
| Evil poptarts will take over chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
AHAHAHAHAHA!(heh I raped the exlamation points) Die, you emotionless freak, DIE!(heh heh raped it again)- I loved the begining, please update soon.
| Kassandra203 chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
Good start :) can't wait for the first chapter
| ShadowCub chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
Die you emo bastard!