|Reviews for Linger|
| Guest chapter 23 . 9/8
this is just ... beautiful u wrote a story perfectly fitting their characters and personalities with such warmth ... this is really good ... i am a harsh critic but this was just great ...
| Flufflez McSugartop chapter 23 . 9/9
oh look, I've dound my yeart...squashed beneath your shoe.
| MountainLights chapter 23 . 6/21
oh look. im crying
| lemonsun chapter 23 . 6/14
I used to think I was heartless, but now I truly am. For it has just been shattered and swept away with the blowing wind *blows nose loudly*
| FanfictionWriterandReader chapter 23 . 6/5
You just HAD to kill him off. Didn't you? *Tears* IT WAS SOOOO BEATUIFULLLLL
| BlazinSalamander chapter 23 . 4/28
It's fine... I didn't need my heart anyway... this is so beautiful though. I love it so much.
| BlazinSalamander chapter 16 . 4/28
I love this so much but my heart ;-
| BlazinSalamander chapter 13 . 4/28
this was so warm and happy but then it turned angsty and sad. ;-;
| Sesshomarusama3 chapter 23 . 4/16
This story is so beautiful, I'm in tears. I just...the poor baby :'(((((((((
| Emotional Guest chapter 23 . 4/4
OMG I'M GONNA CRY, THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL!
| sandy-ramen-thief chapter 23 . 2/18
This was hard as fudge to read. It was really good (depressing, but good), but it would have been so much easier to read all at once in a one-shot. Still, it was good
| PialStigma chapter 23 . 10/19/2016
Damn ninjas cutting onions...
| Sweetmama59 chapter 23 . 8/7/2016
I don't like sad stories but I can't loving this one. It's shortness was sufficient enough to toich my heart. Oh Luffy.
| Suq chapter 19 . 5/29/2016
This chapter made me laugh and cry
Why do you hurt me
| Yournerdymango chapter 23 . 1/3/2016
I read both Linger and its sequel, Aftermath, and I must say that was the most gut wrenching thing I've read in a while. Everything was captured so beautifully and it really moved me to tears. The way you portray the characters and situation make it so real and I just love it! Keep it up!