Reviews for Kith and Kin
Selena92 chapter 17 . 6/1/2021
Awesome!

Came here straight from reading the sequel. Love this story so much!

The explanation about Pariah's enslavement, the experiment. Danny finding out. Whoa.

I love Clockwork. Always liked the guy in canon, but you've fleshed him out so nicely. The Observants are power hungry jerks. How DARE they entrap an innocent like that?

Are Danny and Danni truly also Djall's children? Which would explain Dan, I suppose...but still, I hope they are not. Not that I think they'd be evil or something...just, they've gone through enough.

I love sane Pariah Dark already. It's an amazing brilliant idea you came up with for one of the most horrible canon ghosts...

KUDOS!
RockStarForever1132 chapter 5 . 3/15/2020
THATS WHY DARK SNAPPED! He’s their dad!
Ordalie Gwynfyd chapter 17 . 7/28/2018
I very liked it. Even if I'm not usually fan of the "mad-scientist" vibe for Maddie and Jack, I found the idea of Danny having Pariah as a father pretty interesting.
Cyroclastic chapter 17 . 10/27/2017
Nice story!
Aquawyrm chapter 17 . 10/13/2017
I enjoyed reading this so much, that when I saw the word "sequel" in the author's note, I almost shrieked in joy.
Killua Lawliet chapter 13 . 7/22/2017
Awwww Ammut is always awsome (like in the Kane chronicles)
Hiroasu Akika chapter 17 . 4/9/2017
(For reference, all my reviews were typed as I read, but I couldn't post them at the time because I didn't have internet access.)

Good Pariah is awesome...!
Hiroasu Akika chapter 13 . 4/9/2017
*screaming into pillow while beating head off a wall*
Hiroasu Akika chapter 12 . 4/9/2017
...Bet'cha they're gonna end up purifying Pariah...

...If I'm right I'm gonna beat my head off a wall.

(For reference, no, I'm not cheating by taking guesses based on chapter titles or reading ahead.)
Hiroasu Akika chapter 9 . 4/9/2017
BREATHE DANNY! I'M LOSING IT TOO BUT BREATHE DAMMIT!
Hiroasu Akika chapter 8 . 4/9/2017
...

*halfway through chapter* 15% percent water from each of the Five Rivers, 3% Pariah's blood...

*goes still* ...No...no fricken' WAY.

*reads part where Danny compares photos* *incoherent noises*

"I was the son of Pariah Dark." *unintelligible screeching*

IWASRIGHT
IWASRIGHT
IWASRIGHT
IWASRIGHT
IWASRIGHT
IWASRIGHT
IWASRIGHT
IWASRIGHT
IWASRIGHT
IWASRIGHT
IWASRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIGH-

I MADE A COMPLETELY RANDOM GUESS WHAT THE HELL?!
Hiroasu Akika chapter 5 . 4/9/2017
...My first thought is Pariah for the sheer shock factor. :/ Or MAYBE Frostbite... (would love actual biological father Clockwork though...)
X Miyuki-chan X chapter 17 . 2/18/2017
I loved this story. How you incorporated all of these elements was ingenious. I mostly just love your writing in general.
Jayxon chapter 14 . 12/25/2015
This story is so bloody confusing, and I've read quite a few confusing fanfics in my day.
stuffedcrust chapter 4 . 11/15/2015
Hoooolly shit!
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