|Reviews for Too Close For Comfort|
| miranda55 chapter 8 . 3/12/2012
I just read this story all the way thru - great story, kept my attention easily and I was really caught up in it, and then ...no ending!
Please, Please, find your muse and finish this! I ask this very nicely of course :)
I would really appreciate your finishing this terrific story!
| mina chapter 8 . 9/25/2011
OMG. Please write more; this is how the show should have been.
You have the chemistry back...and the awkwardness expect I think there needs to be more of that from brennan.
I know, Ryan is awesome on Alphas. I think he faked the accent actually or now he can hide it unlike before. Idk either why the first time I saw him I was like vincent is alive then I remembered its a different show and that's why he was killed in bones. He was the most zach like character and I think should have been the permanent new one because it makes sense kind of.
anyways, update soon please.
| berniej chapter 8 . 7/13/2011
Oops I'm with Booth forgot all about Barbie too..oh well she's not important really...other than he's going to have to come to that decision not me lol
Dedfinitely more scarey than the show..Broadsky gives me the chills on this...lets hope Brennnan can save the day!
Thanks for the update
| SouthunLady chapter 8 . 7/12/2011
Thank goodness. I hope she's gone for good and that Booth realizes he doesn't care and that his forgetting to call her was his mind's way of making him realize that. Of course, he's more concerned about Brennan.
| KlingonGal8489 chapter 8 . 7/12/2011
Yay, she's gone! And I really wanted to watch Alphas but I had an exam this morning that I had to study for. I read on Ryan Cartwright's Twitter that he was using an American accent for the show, and I was wondering if he'd be able to pull it off. Apparently, he could!
| Diko chapter 8 . 7/12/2011
Hummm, she got to leave. Glad she's gone but now we have to deal with a hurting Booth. /. It's not filler ;-) It's a plot movement chapter lol.
| xoxokiss210 chapter 7 . 7/4/2011
i loved :O
| berniej chapter 7 . 7/4/2011
This is a far more interesting than the shows version! Broadsky is definitely one scary guy, lets hope Booth can find out where he's planning on being and get him!
Thanks for the update
| Diko chapter 7 . 7/4/2011
Hummmm Broadsky is a little arrogant, having a hurt hand and whatnot. Poor Micah I love his character, hopefully nothing bad will happen to him.
| SouthunLady chapter 7 . 7/3/2011
We have to pray for Booth to stay safe against Broadsky. Very interesting premise. Way to go, Brennan.
| anime0angel chapter 6 . 6/16/2011
I really like this story! (i need to remind my self to look in the bones catagory more often). Your doing a great job and i can't wait for the next chapter. keep up the good work!
P.S. In chapter 2, the very first line reminded me of a movie i've watched once. Did you get that from a movie or something and if you did do you remember the name? its really starting to get to me, lol. Till next time.
| RowdyRomantic chapter 6 . 5/27/2011
Love that Jack is charged with watching her... I could almost see her roll her eyes at the both of them.
| Yatobu chapter 5 . 5/4/2011
Ow c'mon get rid of the blodie asap, If I were Brennan I would not want reporter near their ongoing investigation (_) ... sorry, I'm definitely H hater and been disappointed with S6. But I still find your story interesting and look forward your next update.
| berniej chapter 5 . 5/4/2011
I'm glad someone gets the connection! Booth actually doing his job lol Hannah at the lab..not good she has no place there, even if she did manage to 'learn' something about her boyfriend, not enough to cause her to go away I don't supose.
At least this sniper arc is interesting, more to it than just killing criminals(and people who get in the way of the kill of course!) I still don't get why he's doing it on the show so I'm glad there will be an explanation here!
Thanks for sharing
| jsboneslover chapter 5 . 5/3/2011
This is getting me excited for the sniper storyline again, and it's great possibilities for coming to your senses thanks to partner danger. Wake up and smell the coffee people!
Hope you don't make us wait for the connection, because I'm not figuring it out on my own!
No slaps for you at this point - virtual or otherwise.