|Reviews for Complete Control|
| Passion-and-Danger chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
i love it sooooo much and that ending og god yes! :D
| ANAHI'Simagnation chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
Awww sometimes u gotta love guys being Jealouse but not too jealous
| Blaze828 chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
| shehadastory chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
it was awesome! the only part that was strange was the finger in the belly button but it made me laugh so it was all entertaining also this is going in my top 10 hottest fics
| superfresh chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
wowow this was amazing!
i love oneshots, espeeecially ones where eli is jealous
definitely post some more!
| teasun89 chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
that was deffinitely kinky! ]
| katietay94 chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
I thought I was good! And I love writing stories at 2 in the morning! Haha that's when you get all the creative ideas! :)
| mary24798 chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
This story was great I loved it! Can't wait to c ur next story! Keep up the good work!
| Michi chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
| literarylolita chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
Another wonderful fic from you!
Eli's possessiveness is something I can't wait to see the writer's explore. I have a feeling from the In Too Deep promo that they are going to take it too far and potentially ruin our wonderful Eclare, but the amount was JUST RIGHT in this story. Bravo!
As an avid, active actor (in college), I ADORED this. It's kind of a fantasy for anyone who's ever performed on stage, I think ;)
Your Clare was so sweet. You made her sexy without her being slutty. And the insight into Eli's mind was wonderful.
Oh, and his bossiness to "get on her hands and knees" was incredibly hot.
My only critisism is your use of "him and Clare." The correct grammatical usage would be "he." I CAN'T HELP IT I'M SORRY!