AWESOME! THANK YOU!

I love your version of Crookshanks. Make sure to get that awesome cat a motorcycle. BTW, I love your story too. :)

One thing has always bothered me about the whole giving-clothes-to-house-elves-and-freeing-them — then who did their laundry? Imagine, at the end of a long day cursing do-gooders and muggles, you're taking your socks off and toss one on the floor just as your house-elf pops in with your pajamas and suddenly — your elf is free because he caught your sock by accident!

Um. Not likely. I think you would have to give them clothes with the INTENT to dismiss them, otherwise they could never do ANYTHING relating to clothes while their owner was around for fear of "accidentally" catching a piece of clothing that was dropped.

JK Rowlings really blew it with that scene, totally stupid logic.

I have enjoyed this story a lot but I am a little disappointed that there weren't more issues resolved at the end. Pettigrew was killed by Neville and he is upset, but there is nothing about how he ultimately deals with it. There weren't many other issues resolved other than Harry's secret revealed to a few more people.

The story was well done and kept in tune with Harry being raised as a kneazle. Often there were truly brilliant parts that showed how Harry reacted differently than a human would. Good job.

I can't remember where I found the link to this story but I am extremely glad that I did. This is a great story and very original. I love the part where Harry dismisses the relevance of the house points and tries to explain his thoughts in his terms. This chapter has Harry killing Quirrel in the forest and I have never seen that before. There is just so much originality in this story and it is so well written that I had to take time to review before I reached the end.
Now, on to read some more...

Shit, did the diary capture the twins?! If so, OH. CRAP! :-(

"Pitching arm" is an Americanism, not the sort of thing an English pureblood would say.
Rex is an odd name for a female.

"Felius Domesticus"? Where did you find that? I have seen "Felix Familiaris" before, but the current scientific name for the species is "Felis catus", sometimes "Felis silvestris catus",
I was going to nitpick that a turtle is a reptile, not an amphibian, but then I realised that Ron probably wouldn't know the difference, either.

As funny as the scene is, there is no way Harry and most of the students could have known that phrase, since they would not be familiar with war movies or blasting.

So what did the gruesome detail of Ben's demise actually add to this story?

Ha, Ha! I remember when "The Streak" came out.

Wonderful storey I just started reading Harry potter fanfiction and I'm glad I found this one as one of my starters I really enjoy the cheeky harry. I can't really think of anything wrong with this story so kudos for that. Im looking forward to reading the sequel!

Fabulous fic! I absolutely loved it - very funny and witty. Don't know how I've only just read it. Scuttling off to read the sequel - happy days!
Thanks for writing xx

weasel

I could'nt help wondering about the bet at the end; about "peeing on things to mark his territory". Sure, we humans frown upon peeing just anywhere, but did Harry do something very specific, e.g. piss on the Old Meddler...?