I like your slightly odd and quirky story. It's a take on Harry is an animagus from a young age that is very different from others I have read. I do hope that Harry actually finds his groove at being human. I am sad that he gave away the only connection he had with his human dad. I am irritated at ole Dumbles for not helping him BE human. If a child was a feline for nine years, then he won't have any connection to the mores of his human world. I really want to give him a swift kick! I do hope he gets his cloak back eventually, and understands the connection.

I greatly enjoyed this story. Thank you!

This was hilarious.

PLEASE do your fans a favor and try this:

1. Talk to a friend and count the times you or your friend say the other person's name in a conversation lasting no longer than the one between Harry and Sirius.

2. Count the same for Harry and Sirius.

3. If the number is the same in both cases, you may want to consider a checkup at your countries equalent of St. Mungos, because, well... TRY using your friends name that often in a single conversation and I'm sure you'll see why. _;

Your story is absolutly brilliant! And you're a great writer, for the most part.

But your conversations could use a bit more work.

Try listening to how people speak in real lofe, or watch and analyze the conversations in How I Met Your Mother or another realistic sit-com.

This is one of the top fanfics I have read (and I read a LOT of them, my 500 favorite list is a tiny fraction) but you could easily be even better.

Keep working on your skills and write wonderful, unique art. _

Sooo... Kneezles are like begal cats with water? I mean, minus the begal cats love of it of course. Lol

Also... Why Isis and not Bast? Oo

Hold up. He’s told Ginny was crying her eyes out in her room and he’s f*cking ignored it after talking to Ron. That makes no sense, and is the opposite of what he literally said he would do and has done.

Also the whole cannon reason for Ginny being so influenced and controlled by the diary is her lack of friends or any meaningful support. Since she is now very good friends with Harry, her idol, and has his support the primary reason for the diary’s easy hold over her is gone.

Therefore Ginny being Tom Riddles easily controlled b*tch no longer makes sense, and just feels like the author lazily railroading the story back on the original tracks cause it’s easy.

No joke man, was fucking great until you had him start going to school. Like come on, why in the fuck would he be friends with Ron? One second his like I've never liked him, then the next his like alright, friends. Fuck you.

It make no sense and kills any enjoyment I had for the book, simply cause in 5 seconds you change harry with no warning or reason. FUCK YOU. Why can't people write consistent fucking characters. Fuck yourself

Thanks for a great read! Very nicely done. I do hope we'll be seeing more as real life permits you!

Is Harry gonna turn into a lion like Kneazle’s believe they will?

I just thought of a way to kill a basilisk without a sword or rooster. wonder why no one else has thought of it...huh

oh good. Ron does have a conscience happy day lol

I think the fact that Ron was willing to take an ancestral heirloom from someone who has no clue of its worth says a lot about his character.

Why doesn't ginny just tell her mom to ask anyone who knows animal lifespans? Or to just read the section in a book in the bookstore? It is VERY easy to prove that Scabbers is NOT a rat.

I WANT to be surprised that McGonnigal so stubbornly refuse to even CONSIDER the truth -or a facsimile to it. WANT too...

Unfortunately I've studied psychology for too long to be surprised at human stupidety, and they refusal to accept what they believe to be impossible as a possibility, even if they see the hard evidence with their own eyes... *Sighs and facepalms at human idiocy*

*Pats your back* Well played.

For all that there are times it feels like you strech logic thin to make the story cling to canon, you have a better grasp on human behavior than MOST writers.

Credit where credit is due and all that.

Plus... You're a damned good writer.

I WANT to say it makes no sense that he's suddently BFF with Mione, but... /facepalm

That is SO typical cat! Insisting on being superfriendly with the ONE person whom HATES cats.

He'll proboably win her over too. Like an real evil CATnipulator. (Bad wordplay on cat and manipulator. Lol)

Despite the shoulder-rubbing with canon dragging Harry's character a bit OOC from his personality at times, I am IMPRESSED that you managed to keep the savage survival nature intact!

(Like killing the defenseless troll. MASTERFULLY done! And he DO have a point about stray dogs. In every manner of the saying.)

Poor Harry... Humans and their confusing, illogical rules...

Will he disregard them as stupid (as most humans would with cultural differences), or will he try to follow the stupid rules that are totally stupid, but apperantly the rules?

(There's no way in HELL he's going to change his moral Values. At his age, with the way he was raised, they're set in stone. Especially as they will be enforced time and time again when he goes back to his family.)