Reviews for A SEASON OF POISON
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 4 . 9/2/2012
Well duh he is the next Dark King.
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 3 . 9/2/2012
Harry?Apparition?
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 2 . 9/2/2012
Sounds like wizards.
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
Awesome!Love your style,its mysterious.
anaklusmos1 chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
From the barely-a-synopsis, I was intrigued by this story. Having read the first chapter, I am dissappointed. The grammar is poor, with the narration jumping about all over the place. And what is with the repeated quote:

I'm going to meet you

I'm going to meet you

I'm going to meet you

I'm going to meet you

I don't don't know what that means. Maybe it is meant to be a mystery for the reader but it is incredibly annoying if you repeat the same four-lines that you seem to stick in at random moments in the first chaper. I don't know when you planned this to be set (Ink Exchange? Radiant Shadows?), but Leslie could only see they Fey after IE, and we all know that she left Huntsdale after that. So I don't know what you're trying to do with that. I don't mean to be harsh but I don't want to lie either. There aren't enough Wicked Lovely stories, and there certainly aren't enough GOOD WL stories around.
noneofyourbusiness chapter 4 . 1/28/2011
it's a good plot. maybe something to make it pop a little more...