Reviews for Seventh Time Lucky
Bellanu421 chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
Hey! Its Evans not Evens!
OwlSky15678 chapter 35 . 3/21/2013
Amazing story. Ive been up all night untill I could finish it :) really tired now but I will be reading your Sequal tomorrow. Thanks for a great story xx
Guest chapter 21 . 12/21/2012
just 2 say its patronus
starxkid chapter 7 . 8/8/2012
Hey, everybody is a critic, right? Sorry for correcting you- I love this story.
starxkid chapter 5 . 8/8/2012
James is a chaser...(: But great story.
starxkid chapter 2 . 8/8/2012
You spelled Quidditch wrong and Lily hates it... :/ nvm though It's your story and it's not that bad. (:
starxkid chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
I'm SO sorry for saying this- but Evens is spelled Evans. Please fix it? :3
ParadeThisCity chapter 6 . 6/21/2012
This is very good I LOVE IT SO FLIPPING MUCH! :)

Great writing you really capture the essence of the characters!
rubiesandrain chapter 35 . 4/1/2012
I loved this! Excellent job! :)
katerinagrey chapter 35 . 3/28/2012
Ahh you made me cry. This whole story was amazing, one of the best James and Lily stories on this site. I mean, the whole time I was reading this I was like let them be happy and then I'd remember that they'd die in the next like 2 or 3 year and that made me do sad. But really, this was awesome and all the little spelling and grammar mistakes and easy to overlook because I was so focused on the story. I loved all the party scenes. I also loved how James was always excited about electricity. Sirius was hilarious and you just made me love him even more. I like how you made Lily mad that James was an animals because I've read stories where she didn't care and that annoyed me. So keep on writing, this was awesome and I loved it even if it made me sad.
Super Cara chapter 2 . 12/19/2011
Pretty good so far, but I noticed quite a few spelling errors.
LNDcrazygirl chapter 35 . 12/14/2011
You know it may have taken me awhile to read but i cried at the end that was so sad ;( :(

now reading new story
MaharaniMoony chapter 35 . 12/4/2011
cool ill read it :D
MaharaniMoony chapter 34 . 11/12/2011
I had tears in my eyes as i read this :(

cant wait for the sequel!
iPinkNinja chapter 34 . 11/12/2011
Aw that's a really great ending. I loved this whole story!
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