Words can't describe how much I enjoyed this story. Your writing is beautiful, your imagery wonderful; it set the tone just right. Thanks you for the lovely read!

I really loved it!

im basically done at "you. wonderful, yes"
and is this piece of art wonderful? oh yes!

This is the most sensual piece I've ever read.

This is beautiful.

Wow. Great work.

You. Wonderful, yes.
That pretty much sums up my feelings for this story. I really enjoyed reading this and the love scene was exceptionally brilliant. What I adore most about Royai is just how comfortable they can be with each other without saying much and this story pretty much reflects that! Good job.

Loved it! Thanks for sharing this wonderful work of yours :)

This is perfect. This is the way a love scene should be written, all images and feelings and atmosphere. Not a "lemon" or a "lime." Those terms are too crass and simple for this gem, which is much more than that. If you're not already published, you should be. :)

Lovely (:

"'See you tomorrow.' His hand at her hip stills and curves around her, the sheets falling gently over it. She will wake up to him in the morning, his hands and his sleepy eyes and that slow, satisfied smile."

So simple, and so beautiful.

This was very emotional; I really enjoyed it. :)

Awwwwww

Lovelovelove your writing style. You make these two so in-character and this story came out really sweet.

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Your writing and this storyis stunning. The best oneshot I've read in a long while.

""You," he mumbles against the side of her nose, "wonderful, yes," his hands offering no punctuation as they stutter down her spine. He doesn't talk much in bed, which had surprised her, and when he does it's usually nonsense, but his mouth opens over hers and there's meaning enough."

That was a nice detail that definitely sounds like Roy. This is fantastic.