|Reviews for Lock and Key|
| Goddess-of-Genius chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
Dang, what Neal said unnerved me! I wonder how he knows. You should write a story where Neal tells Peter how he knows that. Great one-shot!
Kind Regards,~ Gg
| zoro-lover-95 chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
that was really good! i like your writing style :)
| Newgirl02 chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
This was great. I love that you made it in Peter's point of view. I would really enjoy a follow-up or companion story to find out how Neal knows so much...(:
| cassius10 chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
I really like what you've done here. That everything Peter knows about Neal is planted, or insignificant. The crumbs for a hamster makes me think of a maze, only there is no cheese at the end,j ust another wall. I absolutely believe that Neal has experienced both sides of this story. Just because it's called "white collar", doen't mean it's neat an clean. Al Capone was convicted of a white collar crime. Nice shadows you've given Neal here!
| Fiction Ghost Writer chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
oh yeah, I'm waiting to fit all the puzzle pieces together to figure out Neal myself ;)
| LadyKarma18 chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
omg can there b a sequel? please :)
| Duffy1 chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
I don't know where this is going or if it's going anywhere,but what a very interesting observation on Peter's part. I've always believed that Neal had a dark side...he would have to in order to survive his work. Good story.
| MaraudingSnitch1314 chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
Very, very interesting! I've never thought about locks in this manner before. Would love to read a second chapter or companion story explaining why Neal knows what he knows... And maybe Peter learning even more of these secrets about his partner. Great work!
| Ultracape chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
That is a mystery. Was this about things Neal did or about things done to Neal. I think it's the latter because if it was the former, he would not have mentioned anything since he does care about Elizabeth and Peter.
But still, it is mysterious.
| Tinnuial chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
Intriguing thoughts...hope you expand on them some day :D thanks for sharing!
| heartfallen chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
I really enjoyed this. Awesome story. Very nice job
| govgal chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
| CandyCakes chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
Oh, this story was kinda scary! But I can kinda see this in Neal sometimes, so good job!
| AgentDiNozzo13 chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
That was a wonderfully-written story. I also caught the darkness in Neal's eyes when he was skeet shooting. I wondered how he learned to use the object he feared most.
I really would appreciate a follow-up, one where Peter finds the reason behind Neal's odd behavior. I'm sure many others would appreciate that too.
| tejdog1 chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
Please continue this? I'd love to find out exactly how and why Neal knows this...