Reviews for My Heart To Break
Christinatewart chapter 7 . 5/6/2015
Write longer chapters, and fill them with...Well more. The story is lacking drama in my opinion, I could be totally wrong though and it's perfect. But you seriously need to lengthen the chapters.

Christina Stewart
THALIARULES chapter 7 . 11/23/2014
I was thinking maybe Tod but he was in the room invisible, that would be fun
isol8d1 chapter 7 . 8/16/2013
please update :)
ranqu chapter 7 . 6/14/2013
I like it!
mysmileiscorrupted chapter 7 . 4/20/2013
Oh no. How didnt Tod notice him there! I hope that wasn't why he left!
Oh god. What will he do to her!
I reaaaaally want to know who or what hurt Sophie!

I love this!
Update ASAP!
I reaaaaaaaaaally need more!
mysmileiscorrupted chapter 6 . 4/20/2013
Poor Sophie, I hope she will be okay!
I wonder who or what wanted to hurt her.
But Nash has no right to force Kaylee to tell him.
I love Harmony though, she is such a great person..

I love this!
Cant wait to read more!
mysmileiscorrupted chapter 5 . 4/20/2013
Awhhhhhhhhhhhh! That was sooooo sweet!
Im glad Kaylee went to see him, that was a very perfect moment...

Until Kaylee got home!
Hope they will be okay!

Love this!
Cant wait to read more!
mysmileiscorrupted chapter 4 . 4/20/2013
Awhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Dont take it out on Tod! He just wanted to help you..
But, im glad Sophie and Kaylee are friends now and with Emma! :D
Kaylee, just listen to Tod please!
I love how Sophie and Kaylee reacted to Nash too!
mysmileiscorrupted chapter 3 . 4/20/2013
Oh. My. Gosh.
I was not expecting Sophie at the door.
I was not expecting what Sophie said, the second half? I read and have to say I laughed. Im not really sure why.. But I just feel soooo bad for Kaylee and for Sophie actually. I wonder how a certain other female teenager will react..

But I love it, shame Tod done that though :/

Love this chapter all the same!
Cant wait to read more!
mysmileiscorrupted chapter 2 . 4/20/2013
Awhhh.. Tod is soo sweet!
I wish Kaylee just ignored the door and listened to what Tod had to say!
But I reaallly want to know who is at the door!

Love this!
Cant wait to read more!
mysmileiscorrupted chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
Awhhhh... Poor Kaylee,
Tod tried and he got Emma.

Love this!
Cant wait to read more!
carrie-alyssa-collins chapter 7 . 1/22/2013
:O I know you haven't updated in like a year but pleeeaaaseee update soon! You can't leave it there its so dramatic!
cl.lee chapter 3 . 8/28/2012
Completely unexpected. Sophie is pregnant? Tod is cold to her? This is an interesting twist! :)
booknerd999 chapter 7 . 8/12/2012
Is there going to be more?
Guest chapter 7 . 7/26/2012
i want to hear nash and tod's
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