Ha! That leads to more life-or-death situations than any other single act. Always fun to see how those with power handle such a mundane problem.

Definitely interesting to see the interactions and the way the characters are developing.

Stuff is going to hit the fan when they arrive. It is going to be awesome to see.

Awesome. Got to love some good old fashion defiance.

That was great! I would hate to have someone say that to me in that situation. Can't wait to read more.

That was entertaining. Think I will enjoy reading this story if it keeps going this way.

Seriously! You're pushing TOO FAR!

1. There is NO reason for Negi to break down ESPECIALLY after you made him use the fever technique. NO I DON'T CARE HOW YOU TRY TO PSYCHOLOGICALLY RATIONALIZE IT ESPECIALLY SINCE FROM CANON BEFORE YOU ALTER THE PLOT HIM TALKING ABOUT IT WOULDN'T SHAKE HIM UP WHENHE SHOWED THE STATUES TO HIS STUDENTS!

2. SERIOUSLY, your gonna pull some bullshit about not bathing for three weeks? First your insulting, second with all the time he used a spatial time artefact he's eleven and he trained with EVA FUCKING VAMP MISTRESS. WHAT MAKES YOUTHINK SHE WOULD ACCEPT SUCH A NASTY BAD HABIT IN HER STUDENT.

3. The begins series started in 2003-2004 timeline wise. Lyrical nanoha is roughly 2008-2012 in terms of earth technology and Japanese pop culture.

interesting story. i would love fate to meet fate A.

It's been EIGHT MONTHS. Please, PLEASE update soon!

...urr. Cliffhanger. (Gonna go check out Parallel Investigations then.)

...crud.

NCIS and JCA. Woot.

Er. That scratch? (And this is definitely a TMM crossover.)

So Hakase and Chao were involved with the Tokyo Mew Mew project. *blinks* Doesn't surprise me.

Ooh, Gurren Lagann reference.

It's only the opening salvo. Negi isn't going to lose just yet.

(And Arika, not Akira.)

The God of Game Breaking huh? hehe thats a Badass title , yeah negi would have whooped them flat hes too overpowered update soon!