|Reviews for The Mouse of Konoha|
| Scarease chapter 1 . 3/4
i found this to be a good story it is Sading that you have not continued it
| Hackee le Nooblordo chapter 21 . 3/1
Cant wait for chpt 5!
| DarkusCyril chapter 21 . 2/27
Haha this story is great, update it soon, I can't wait to see what happens next
| Guest chapter 21 . 2/14
Ingenious. Absolutely love this story. It s an absolute riot. So funny
| Duncan0Idaho chapter 2 . 1/31
wait Gai a woman, wai gai a woman... no computo.
| beulah2013 chapter 3 . 1/15
I thought Anko died - that she was the first ninja to trade a lesson for weapons.
| Olfrik chapter 21 . 1/11
Just reread this awesome story and remembered all the things that made me want more of this. I'm praying to whatever or whoever out there that can make you post more of this story to make you do so. I can't wait to see if Narutos hobby really is the dancing and what he'll be making of it in some ninja business. And I'm dying to know what the scorpions are really there for. I'm wondering if there will ever be a Sasuke at the gathering of clans and how the academy staff is going to deal with a pack of ninja wannabes that take Naruto's filthy ways as sth to aspire to or surpass. I can just imagine Ino or even Sasuke starting a competition to who spent their day of academy education in the most ninjs-like way.
Please don't let us starve here.
Cheers to you and a happy 2014
| Ro0w'z chapter 1 . 1/7
Naruto can read ... and can not speak well ... ooook
| DDJ chapter 8 . 12/31/2013
Seen the explanation before still don't know who thought it first but if you watch the Naruto vs Neji fight you see Naruto make clones that have different amounts of chakra, where Neji can tell them apart, and Naruto making them with same amount, where Neji can't tell them apart. As such your explanation on how much chakra they take is wrong.
Good story well written just don't understand where that idea came from, if you know where it started would like to know.
| Vibrolux61 chapter 21 . 12/21/2013
Really cool story. Love how you make Naruto a sneaky ninja, instead of a standard brutish brawler! I hope this story will be continued!
| Yukino-chan chapter 21 . 12/15/2013
waiting for updates impatiently! haha! this has been a good read!
| Guest chapter 15 . 12/1/2013
The whole flashback about Kumo was waaaay to confusing for me...
| Googlemo chapter 4 . 11/26/2013
this story is really well written, but takes too long for Naruto to grow up, its not really interesting to read aboit infant naruto.
| Googlemo chapter 2 . 11/26/2013
Hana is at least 6 years younger than Kotetsu and Izumo... well can't actually blame you, cause its better to change their ages than to create some nameless OC.
| NightWithMoon chapter 12 . 11/17/2013
Yeah sorry, but I'm going to have to agree with whoever else said it, this story is torturously slow, worse than lord of the rings at its worst. Certainly I can understand the desire to not have stupid fight scenes where your characters monologue, but you've really got to pick up the pace - most novels aren't half this long and I don't feel like you've even gotten to the real meat/beginning of the story... I feel like I've been stuck reading back story for the last 250 thousand odd words.