Too many fillers man. I can't stand it anymore

While most fics get better as they progress, this one, for some reason, gets worse. I liked the start, as it seemed pretty realistic, but when the story began describing the lives and interactions of mature characters, the flaws started to show. I had to drop it when Naruto started pranking clan leaders, as by that point, he was doing whatever he wanted and reality itself bent to his wishes.

The author's skills would be better utilized by focusing on kids interactions and avoiding adult characters altogether.

good story, wish you kept going, even with your fear of putting too much filler, the series itself had filler, some of which was actually good. your story had filler, most of it was good, so we would like moar mouse adventures pls

What a wonderful start! Looking forward to finding out how it goes on!

he's six already why is he talking like a fbaby

If you had left it like this the story would be a very good one-shot with the possibility of sequels, I'm glad there are more chapters :D

As soon as i read bagpipe, i just imagined Naruto play Scotland the Brave.

Naruto is MUAD'DIB!

this language whatever that these people of the leaf speaks is horid

please make a sequel this was soooooo good probably the best Naruto fiction I've ever read and definitely the best considering thus was pre academy absolutely amazing

Thank you. As part of my annual "read my favorite fanfics," I came to visit. I still love your story.

sir author ignore those haters send them to suck fifty thousand hectares of penises

I honestly think that my capabilities of playing pretend is equal now and back then. Obviously doing it was easier when I was a shameless child, but nowadays I honed my acting skills in VRChat.

this was so great! you are very talented!

And with confirmation of the shapeshifting jutsu... Naruto could use shadow clones in a snake henge to manage the more fiddly bits of the Snake style.