|Reviews for The Mouse of Konoha|
| jay chapter 23 . 7/10
Dam i love this story so much its not even funny..best writer on this site bar none
| Riyuka chapter 23 . 7/9
I totally love this story! It is so well thought out, has so many depths about ninja life and is still full of humour and wit, it's great.
And of course, I also love the mouse. Even though he is a bit overpowered for someone his age, he gained it all through hard work, dedication and his experiences. I guess he can be considered a genius in his own way.
His ninken retrieval mission was quite unbelievable, but you somehow made it possible for him, to really achieve this stuff. I really like, that you show now, that he still has a long way to go. I wonder where the mouse will go next.
Furthermore, I love the writing style of this story, I just can't stop reading if I start a new chapter. Thank you!
| anon chapter 23 . 7/8
So, so glad you posted another update. I reaaally enjoy this fic, the Mouse is an extremely entertaining character to read. Hope you manage another update in the near future, but I'll be happy to wait if need be with content this amazing. Hard to find good fics on this site sometimes, yours is one of the better written Naruto ones.
| YuNaru19 chapter 15 . 7/7
Ha that's hilarious Love Hina was my first manga and first step towards my love of all things japanese entertainment.
| Guest chapter 23 . 7/7
I love that fiction. I am full of awe for your mind and imagination. After all, what ever idea Naruto will show us, it's you who actually have to think it first!
Does Naruto think about having a public face (the one similar to the canon one) that is loud and straightforward, as another cover for his "silent" work? I think it would be hard, if not impossible for him to stay unknown and unnoticed (because of his status, but also because of his natural charisma).
After all Minato was know in all Nations as a great ninja, but what were his real skills? He was known for his flash technique (in manga even Rasengan isn't often recognized as the 4th technique), and that he know about seals. But what more jutsu did he know and used, what could he actually do with seals... that was a mystery that most people even didn't think about it.
("One jutsu ninja" was he not, since he was a hokage, but how often, even in fanfics he is using only hiraishin with some minor seals, tajutsu and rasengan, and nothing more?)
| YuNaru19 chapter 7 . 7/5
So I feel the need to correct you a bit the Kyubi(Kurama) is as tall as the Hokage's monument (which is a mountain) and it can flatten mountains and raise tsunamis with a single swipe of his tail. To compare his size to that of a warehouse is very wrong.
| Lazuli chapter 23 . 7/5
Awesome! That scene between Tora and the Sandaime was just cute! And the Shino gets the living daylights threatened out of him scene was hilarious! XD
| chibi monsta chapter 23 . 7/5
Yay you're back. I love this story because, 1) its super long, which I love and really pack full of details and all. It took me 3 days to reread it. 2) Naruto is not pathetic or super idiot and brilliant at the same time. I know hes like that in cannon and I can accept it, but too many fanfiction like that can be boring too. And lastly 3) I really love your plot. I can't expect it half the time thus its enjoyable and blew me away with what you can come up with. I really wish I could write like that. Can't wait for the next chapter and hopefully its longer than this one and not that long wait. Not that I'm complaining. It would be awesome if i can get a chapter with few words too lol
| bipolarwithcats chapter 23 . 7/3
I love that you updated. This is one of my favorite stories.
| Armandhas chapter 23 . 7/3
I love your story. I live the length, the development of Naruto and how you illustrate everything. There are only a few things I have noticed that i would like to comment on and would like to ask.
1 comment, teme is not a suffix. It is just a rude version of addressing someone in their face. Not when talking about someone.
2 comment, the same goes for koi. Also not a suffix but I've only seen you use it in earlier chapters.
3 comment, I lover the attention to detail you have. For example the tea ceremony at the Hyuuga, the name of a female samurai, the conduct in a brothel and the very fitting secundair sources of income for the clans. My utmost respect for this.
My question is related to the period in which Anko lived with Naruto. In that month or so, she thought him the beginnings of her snake styled unarmed combat. But seemingly nothing remains from it. It appears he reverted to being a brawler that simply fights dirty rather than somebody trained to fight dirty (if I remember the description you gave of the style correctly). So am I missing something or did you forget you had him learn that for however short it was.
Another quick question. He made no progress with his self discovered tree climbing chakra control exercise? In the 2/3 or so years since he's been doing it?
Once again, I greatly enjoy the story and eagerly await the next update.
And best of luck with finding a publisher
| jfcwtfusernames chapter 4 . 7/3
"all the condiments where they are rather than chopped up for kindling".
Weirdest sentence ever.
| i am the king chapter 23 . 7/3
This was amazing as usual
Please please update soon can't wait
| Greysh chapter 23 . 7/2
great chapter :-) glad to see more of the Mouse! It's been a long time since I read this fic, so it was a great time to reread everything. I've loved it and I'm still loving it :)
It's a great story with a very "ninja" naruto vs loudmouth dobe like in so many fics.
I'm glad that you write in such detail about the clans and still manage to have enough humor in it to be a enjoyable read.
It's not to heavy or dark. (yes the last chapters were a bit darker, but they fitted. naru has always known more about the real ninja life than children his age.)
I find your new ninja devision to be very interesting.
I'm hoping to read more :)
Good luck with your writing and publishing too!
| Crystal M. Key chapter 23 . 7/1
I really enjoyed reading this chapter. Naruto is preatty resilient, and I like that Sarutobi took the time to explain his decision to the boy. It will be exciting to see how the Mouse learns from Nezumi. I love Naruto's friendship with Shino; it was amusing to see Naruto's response when Shino threatened Ichiraku. The fact that Tenten is already sparkling when excited makes me anticipate when she's actually on Team Gai. Will Naruto infiltrate her class with her help, and give the Academy another lesson? Thank you for the great chapter!
| pikachucat chapter 23 . 7/1