|Reviews for Only Stop When I Say When|
| PugLife66 chapter 7 . 1/13
holy crapbaskets story is great
| PugLife66 chapter 6 . 1/13
| PugLife66 chapter 5 . 1/13
| PugLife66 chapter 4 . 1/12
holy poopsac this story awesome
| PugLife66 chapter 3 . 1/12
| PugLife66 chapter 2 . 1/12
Holy Cow thats... awesome
| PugLife66 chapter 1 . 1/12
| DarkVoid116 chapter 8 . 9/3/2013
I'm unsure how I feel about this chapter now...
And this story, actually.
I would've liked for Bra to somewhat come to Gohan's rescue. I mean, I know Gohan and Bra were not even at all in love, but still...
For Vegeta to beat the everloving shit out of Gohan is a fitting result of the affair, but I still VERY much expected more out of this ending. Videl and Gohan had no confrontation. Vegeta and Gohan had basically stole ALL of the drama for the entire story. I liked the ending in that it had a huge confrontation... and had Bra come to his rescue it would've been perfect.
As it is, it's a decent ending but nothing spectacular.
Good job though.
| DarkVoid116 chapter 7 . 9/3/2013
Vegeta definitely knows and is just trying to keep Gohan calm. Or at least that is what I think is going on right now. I could be wrong, but I don't think I am.
Bra and Gohan's passion for one another obviously isn't love- I have known this for quite awhile at this point - but it is still strangely... /hot/ and there's no two ways around that fact.
Pan and co. will be back soon, and the fallout HAS to happen next chapter...which scares me.
This was a good chapter, and I'm super excited for next chapter.
| DarkVoid116 chapter 6 . 9/3/2013
That was intense, holy crap!
Bra and Gohan finally had outright sex, and, wow, it was hot! That was awesome! The description, the emotion, the everything! Just...wow!
This chapter was absolutely incredible. Normally I write compliments but have some reservations, but this chapter was so beautifully written and indulged absolutely everything about the guilty pleasure I have and the spot I have for Bra and Gohan in my fanfiction mind...
A truly amazing chapter!
I cannot wait for the fallout and the next two chapters... How will Pan, Goten, Chi Chi, Trunks, Bulma, Vegeta, and Videl react?
| DarkVoid116 chapter 5 . 9/3/2013
It's about time Chi Chi entered the picture... I can't imagine the fiery and ambitious girl who practically manipulated Goku into marrying her acting like this, to be honest. It seems... so out of character, honestly.
Bra and Gohan will now have the house together for a weekend?! YAY. It's time for them to get down to business and officially have straight up sex and spend a weekend together as lovers.
Pan seems devastated but I'm not sure how to act with Pan being so girly and emotional. It comes as a bit of a shocker to me...
| DarkVoid116 chapter 4 . 9/3/2013
Pan unknowingly gave some advice to her father just now, haha.
Bra giving Gohan a blow job and Mrs. Rice- ironically named as such considering Gohan's Japanese translation of his name- was entertaining. Bra Briefs is quite the vixen, kind of like her mother in lots of ways honestly.
When Pan finds out Bra and her father were fooling around? Oh boy, there is going to be HELL to pay for Bra and Gohan.
Chi Chi is given a bit of an awful rap in this story to be honest. She's better than this and yet she has basically abandoned her family.
| DarkVoid116 chapter 3 . 9/3/2013
This is another solid chapter.
Gohan and Videl had screentime in this chapter, which is a refreshing thing. Goten had a little time too.
Bra kissing Gohan for the first time and then having the troublesome pair make it a bit far was nice, and very, very, very sexy. I really liked it.
BraGohan mmmm. I'm such a big fan of this coupling in this setting...
| DarkVoid116 chapter 2 . 9/3/2013
Gohan is going to give in to Bra's temptations and, if this chapter is any indication, it's going to happen super fast. This is a short-ish story and is complete so each chapter is gonna contain endless excitement and drama.
Pan and her attitude is getting old real fast, and Videl pissed me off a bit in this chapter with her overbearing attitude. On the bright side, I might not mind the GohanBra affair as much now.
Bra is just so fucking sexy, holy shit... sitting on Gohan's lap like that, stimulating him, making Gohan want her. She is cunning, she is devious, she has amazing sex appeal, she's young, and she's simply amazing. I guess Bra is simply a humongous guilty pleasure of mine and has been for awhile.
| DarkVoid116 chapter 1 . 9/3/2013
Bra Briefs is always a guilty pleasure of mine since she's incredibly sexy in GT and fanon in general. Goten x Bra and Gohan x Bra are two couples I enjoy immensely but are rare to find, Gohan/Bra moreso than Goten/Bra.
Pan being in the midst of a rebellious stage is intriguing considering everything we know about Pan. She's ambitious and fiery in canon. She also loves her mother and father and respects them and her Grandpa Goku greatly throughout GT, which makes this disrespectful stage interesting. Is she friendly with Bra? Does she know about the skimpy-as-fuck clothes that Bra wears? What about Pan and Trunks? Do they know one another? Are they a couple? I wanna know these things...
Gohan as a teacher and Bra as his naughty, sexy student has been done in other stories I've read, but Gohan and Videl are normally broken up/divorced or otherwise not together in them. Or, at the very least, extremely unhappy. In this story, however, Gohan is happily married to Videl with Goten and Pan in the family mix as well, and yet Gohan is going to cheat on Videl with Bra nonetheless (I assume)...
Great introductory chapter!