Reviews for Sucker Punch |
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![]() ![]() ![]() MORE? please? I'd really love to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am blown away by the insights you have into these characters! This is an awesome beginning! I love getting inside Kate's head and I have to believe that you're pretty spot-on with what you said is going on there. It's very satisfying to 'hear' her list Castle's good traits, although she is definitely doing that more than ever before in the show. Even though all of her reflections have Castle coming out on top over Josh, you didn't do any Josh bashing to make it look childish. The most meaningful statements for me were, "He never has to fight for her because she never gives him any indication that there is anything more to fight for," and "How has he never even attempted to ask the hard questions?" It's beautiful to think of how well Castle knows her at this point and how far he'll go to both keep her safe and make her happy. I can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I could see this really happening sometime hope you continue the story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! I hope you continue this. You capture Kate really well. :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Congratulation, this was excellent. I don't like the concept on which it was written (I mean that even though Josh was "the man" in her life for more than half a year yet she closed him out from the most important part of her, without what she is not what she is), your story was very good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() More. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Something like this may have to happend |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is good stuff! pretty please with sugar on top, can you continue? I LOVE IT |
![]() ![]() ![]() AHHH I love this, especiallu how you did it all in Beckett's head. Great ending to the chapter too. Can't wait for your next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh god I wish this would actually happen! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sucker punch was the perfect title. Beckett gets it as she realizes what Castle truly means to her. Josh gets it in more ways than I care to list. Poor sucker indeed. And even Castle gets it without really being present even if he is the elephant in the room. Well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Her confusion was sooooo evident. Loved how she kept comparing him back to Castle, and he'd come up short every time, but she just couldn't fit all the pieces together to let herself acknowledge that she really wanted Castle and not Josh. Very nicely done. And pretty realistic with the characters. Hope you continue it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() GUHHH. This is so perfect. SO PERFECT. If you want to continue... :) |