Reviews for Sucker Punch |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love that you had them looking for each other, that Lanie took care of her, and that the boys made him leave. I love that You made them finally open up, but still have fears. I love that you didn't make the sex scene (which was extremely hot) be perfect bliss, that it was very realistic (and hot). I see that you started this story in January? I hope that doesn't mean you only update once a month. This story is so good, and I really enjoy your writing style. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Must. breathe. now. Great writing. That was intense. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome that they are still them the next day. Cruel cliffhanger. (I'm glad I just found this story & don't have to wait to know what happens next.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's about the best damn psychological profile of Beckett that I've read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well that certainly ran through the whole spectrum of emotions. The banter & the boys' reaction was funny. Lanie's surprise & uncertainty was well done. The making out was hot. Kate's answers were disappointing and angering. Poor Castle. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, Josh taking the high road... I like it. And Kate feeling like crap, as she should. But still sad to see. And sad for Castle to not know what's going on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're driving me crazy! You are a master at building anticipation. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You, dear, are an excellent writer. Great job showing the gamut of emotions and thoughts between these two. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gasp! Good god! They definately need to brainstorm like that! |
![]() ![]() You wrote: It isn't perfect, but it's sweet, and it's real, and she loves him even more for it" and my feelings towards this story can be describes as following: It isn't real, but it's sweet, and it's perfect, and I love Castle even more for it. I am sorry, that was REALLY corney, but I just really love this story. I was a bit upset that it took their lives to be in danger, for her to realize her love for him, why does it always have to be like that, but this was just so wonderful, that I really do not care anymore. This was a fantastic update, I enjoyed it very much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I saw you Twitter message just an hour ago and I realised I had read this, but I hadn't reviewed it. Shame on me. For the record I hated it that you took so long to get this far. You promised me like 6 months that this was gonna be 10 chapters and M-rated for a reason, and it took six months. Worst kind of torture, believe me. I saw this quote a few days ago on Twitter; "One day you life will flash before your eyes. Make sure it's worth watching." -Gerard Way. It seems Kate is now (finally) aspiring to that philosophy. It's really good. Living in/seizing the moments with Castle is much better then letting time pass you by and wait for life to come to you. Having them share this is such a big step and undoubtedly the last. Please don't it here please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Incredible chapter! Can't say enough good about it! After the last chapter, I knew things would change and this chapter was just amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is truly incredible. it kind of blew my mind. i cannot wait to see where you take it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I couldnt look away from how they melted into each other. Castle being the one who wanted to wait and Kate wanted to proceed. Im glad you opened a window and let in some light after the last chapter. And as you did it suddenly got a little hot! More please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OOhhh! THAT was intense. Really hard core intense. |