Reviews for The Break Even Point
Hero's Chanson chapter 1 . 8/27/2018
(Okay so I'm like seven years late but) I really enjoyed this. You took two things I love really and expertly combined them. My only regrets are 1. that this isn't canon and 2. that I pulled an all nighter reading this in one go.
SandraS chapter 6 . 4/30/2017
Great story. It runs so smoothly and well thought out, all dots connected and absolutely believable. A pleasure to read.
Long Live BRUCAS chapter 6 . 4/10/2017
Wow he really turned his life around. Like this take on Oceans/Danny Williams. Very good.
Pan2fel chapter 6 . 9/16/2015
Omg! ! How can you do this? ! ? ! It's amazing! I want to read more about his life in Hawaii. I know there is a sequel from another author I think. I have to read this next.
For the story: it's really well written and I like the transition from Turk to Danny, it's subtle and it's awsome how he doubts himself and then is confident again and then sees his criminal self again. And woah - mind blowing :)
I would really love to read more in this universe!
Dimac99 chapter 6 . 5/3/2015
While I'm not sure I can see Turk having the discipline to become a cop for any significant amount of time, I can totally see him taking the job just to win a bet with Virgil! I really enjoyed this fic :-)
anon chapter 1 . 1/12/2014
Please continue this!
JP chapter 6 . 8/1/2013
Greatest Fan Fiction of Danny Williams ever! But if you ever consider on writing some more chapters, then I think it'll be Greatest Fan Fiction of Hawaii Five-0 ever! And maybe you could write about how Steve found out who Danny really is . . . Just think about it.
LOVETHIS chapter 6 . 6/30/2013
Hey, this is awesome! I love this idea and I've been trying to look for good ones and I never found one until I stumbled upon this! Please continue somehow about when he meets Steve and the team for the first time! That be Bloody Brilliant!
misamiera chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. I didn't even know I wanted it until you wrote it.
So. So, so, so beautiful.
I am in awe of how you capture the ups, downs, delights, desires, anger, EVERYTHING of this Turk/Danny. I'm truly in awe. This is so perfect. chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
I absolutely adore this crossover! You blended the two so well, love it! Any chance your going to do a continuation of this?
Flynne chapter 6 . 11/5/2012
Yet another very late review, considering this story was posted almost two years ago, but I couldn't just let this go. This was awesome! Love the idea of merging the Ocean's 11 and H50 universes - you did it creatively, believably, and seamlessly. Very well-written! Great job!
LuoLiBei chapter 6 . 10/3/2012
Very awesome. I loved the gradual transition from Turk to Danny over the course of the story. I didn't really notice it as it happened but the character's voice really changed as you wrote. I need to watch the Ocean's 11 movies again, it's been years and I wasn't really aware of Scott Caan at the time. :)
aloha94 chapter 6 . 7/11/2012
That was one of the most amazing stories I have ever read. The transition from Turk to Danny was an amazing ride and I loved every word. Will you ever continue this idea and let the team find out about Danny's past? That would be terrific and I think any fans of this story would love to read it.
lokobookworm95 chapter 6 . 5/2/2012
This story is awesome! I love the Ocean movies, and I love Hawaii Five-0, so to have them combined in such an amazing way is completely awe-inspiring. Great, great job! Someone should write about what happens when his team finds out, too! That is, literally, the only way this story could get any better.
infiniteternity chapter 6 . 5/1/2012
The most complete, brilliant analysis of Danny's pre-series mindset that I've ever seen in any work of fan fiction, and it's not even canon. Screw that. I refuse to acknowledge that this is not the truth. It gives a background to Danny's life that the real series never really bothered to built and, now, it's part of what I'll accept as the truth. Like a good con. ;)

Thank you for writing this, thank you for doing it brilliantly, and thank you for seeing it to the end. I doubt I'll ever forget this fic, and I know for sure, that I'll recall it every time I'm reading something else and wondering about Danny's past.
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