Reviews for I'm Kidnapped
RavenclawGirl29 chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
You mislabeled it, I think you meant to put it under "Chibiusa" not "Chibi-Chibi" Chibiusa is Sailor Moon's future daughter, Rini in English. Chibi-Chibi is a different person entirely, she's the future version of Sailor Moon who regressed into a child and was sent back in time to change the future. (and/or the starseed of the Star's series' final boss in the anime)
Luna-P27 chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
well I would like to know what happened, if you're still the story
Novus Draconis chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
Okay, I'll warn you, this is gonna hurt. The first thing I noticed is that you do not space between dialogue. This is especially confusing to your readers as, simply put, they don't know who's talking and when. Secondly, Proper nouns, which would be the "Person, Place, or Thing" are always, always, capitalized. Thirdly, the bouncing back and fourth between character names(i.e. Endymion, and later, Darien) is way too confusing. I will keep tabs on your story to see if you have taken any of my suggestions into practice.