Reviews for Naruto: Myoushuu no Fuuin
sh8ad8ow chapter 7 . 8/2/2011
great chapter and good that you updated again cant wait for the next chapter and the start of the exams, to see how your gonna do them.
boonerunner chapter 7 . 8/2/2011
This is an excellent story so far. I hope that Team 7 will be facing significantly strong adversaries in the Chunin exams: it wouldn't be as much fun if they simply destroy their opposition.
Deadzepplin chapter 7 . 8/2/2011
NICE! I wonder if Danzo is going to try and meddle with the exams or if Naruto can either seal away the curse mark disable it or fix/remove it
Zero Reader chapter 7 . 8/2/2011
Great chapter and I'm pumped to see the chaos they cause in the exam.
JKArcanus chapter 7 . 8/2/2011
Brilliant, simply brilliant.
bakapervert chapter 7 . 8/2/2011
Thanks for the update. You've outdone yourself. This chapter is pretty good with all the trick and politic.
dragonblack chapter 7 . 8/2/2011

A Haiku:

Quality is pursued

But waiting is difficult

you mother fucker

DBDrake, year of Rabbit 2011, month of the Morning Glory

I appreciate you have to write the good shit, but sometimes I think you've been run over by a train or something. The perils of quality!

But by all means, keep me worried. Slow is better than crappy writing, which you most definitely do not deliver.

Excellent chapter, less character development, and more PLOT which in this case is not a metaphor at all. Good to see the complaints wrapped up with no irrational drama, and in one chapter! Most excellent. Some parts of the various shady plots did not get much in the way of fleshing out, and some more info on the reactions of the involved characters who are not Team 7/ Joekage would have been neat, but asking for more is gauche, and what there is is well executed.

And, to finish, another poem!

There once was a young (man/woman) from Bes-Pelargic

who writes some of the very best fic

but god damn was it slow,

and I thought he should know,

that that he needs to drop everything else in his life and write like, 20 pages a day or someone would ravish his horse, burn down his wife, and ride away on his house-ic.
XPGamer chapter 7 . 8/2/2011
Would be interesting to see either Team 8 or Team 10 not be signed up for the exams because of what happened.

Great chapter, can't wait to see what Kakashi has in store for Asuma and Kurenai
Linkmarth chapter 7 . 8/2/2011
Excellent chapter : )
animeflunky chapter 7 . 8/2/2011
This story makes me so happy. This team kakashi is like the original team 7 on super badass steroids Love the naruto youve developed in this story as well. Can't wait to see the team tear up the chuunin exams. Be interested to see how seal user naruto deals with gaara. So many options :)
McGeezel chapter 7 . 8/2/2011
I've been having such a shitty week, this made it better. I was so excited to see the update in my mailbox. I did not see this chapter coming at all. At first I was bummed because I thought it would be a whole lot of boring political BS. But the response of team 7 to the review and the way they broke into the Hokage's office was awesome. I laughed when I got to the part where Kakashi was watching them and when Sasuke conned Kuro. It was great. And they're all back together. And Sakura is finally stepping up with the boys. Can't wait till next month to see where you go before and during the chunin exams. This is still Top 3 stories i'm currently reading or have read (I've read it through 4 times I think). thanks for the update, you rock
george17 chapter 7 . 8/2/2011
Great chapter. Love the idea of all three being highly competent members of a team. Kakashi as much more than a porn reading zombie is much more fun and much more realistic given his background.
raw666 chapter 7 . 8/2/2011
You know, I wonder how Kurenai survive for being a fangirl of Asuma. Things are not going to end well for the team, keep up the work.

For Kakashi, why should it be weird to be known as Naruto's sensei since it mean he be ratable for the other girls to like him better and maybe get a discount for it. [; That is assuming you are guy not looking for a permanent relationship or even a long meaningful one.

Well, keep up the work and good update.
Codenamed-Bolt chapter 7 . 8/2/2011
Seriously, put this under the categories of adventure and comdedy. This story is pure gold. If this was the official Naruto manga story line, I'd go out of my way to buy the actual thing from the printing agency just to read it. I love all of the one liners, the character development, the camaraderie (sp?), and plausible explanatios for their growth in strength.

Genma seriously underestimated the three of them and paid for it...TWICE! And I believed it was a legitimate butt kicking he recieved from the Super Team 7. Update soon and don't leave us with such a huge gap between updates again, please?
goddessa39 chapter 7 . 8/2/2011
I'm really loving this. Seriously. Team 7 is usually one of those things we all see set up to watch them fall like rising dominoes but here its muck thats been stepped on only to turn into radioactive platinum and gold.

It would be awesome to see some more intel into Naruto's past.
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