Reviews for The Foreign Papers
mrsvixter chapter 31 . 7/5/2014
great story
different story line very good
i really liked the more to date edward even thou he was older than cannon
cctwilight chapter 31 . 7/4/2014
I enjoyed the story.
divyvicki chapter 25 . 7/2/2014
I liked the chapter, but could gave done without the killing of the porpoise.
divyvicki chapter 24 . 6/29/2014
Very interesting take on Bella's gift.
divyvicki chapter 23 . 6/26/2014
Thank u so much for not pulling ur Fanfiction stories to publish. Great chapter. Can't wait to see where Bella has gone.
divyvicki chapter 22 . 6/20/2014
I think u did a great job explaining the transformation.
hippogriff-tamer chapter 31 . 6/17/2014
Wonderful story..reminds me of Elizabeth Hunter's elemental vampire books a bit with all the journals but trust me that's a good thing. thank you for sharing it...
hippogriff-tamer chapter 30 . 6/17/2014
poor Maggie but I'm glad that Aro is gone and the family is back together...
hippogriff-tamer chapter 24 . 6/17/2014
I thought that it was Maggie that was gone not bella..must have misread it somehow...I like Bella and how she stands up to Edward and I do like that Edward is more open minded though he still retains some of hos personality from the books. I just feel o sad for Alice about Jasper..hope that they get everyone back...
hippogriff-tamer chapter 23 . 6/17/2014
So far loving this story...though its sad about Carlisle, Esme and the others being in the Volturi's grasp...I wonder if Maggie is really what she says she is or if she's playing them...look forward to reading more
cristalena chapter 31 . 6/16/2014
I loved this story! I'm sad it's over. You did a great job and I'm excited to check out some more of your stories. Thanks for writing! :)
divyvicki chapter 20 . 6/12/2014
Very interesting interaction between Maggie and Bella
NanStew chapter 31 . 6/12/2014
Absolutely wonderful story. Thank you. But where did you go? No Epi, so what happened?
NanStew chapter 24 . 6/12/2014
That bubble is surely going to help rescue the Cullens.
NanStew chapter 14 . 6/11/2014
Okay, so Bella, Edward and Alice are going to save Jasper, Carlisle and Esme. I'm expecting it.
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