Reviews for The Foreign Papers
ParasiteGoddess chapter 3 . 4/11/2012
I'm 3 chaps in and so addicted!
Erikajo chapter 31 . 3/30/2012
Still love this story! :)
Fullofpassion09 chapter 31 . 3/16/2012
I beer liked how Carlisle was so compassionate and understanding but was made out to be judgmental and obviously disappointed in jasper... He never settled or meshed with me...

Sad to see these characters go but so happy I was allowed in their world!
Fullofpassion09 chapter 30 . 3/16/2012
Not sure how I feel about Maggie's revelation. I figured it went deeper than casual for her but Edwards response made me uneasy, like maybe there was more to his feelings than he will admit even to himself. I get that he'd beat himself up over not knowing but even if he did what could he of done if he didn't return her depth of feelings.

Look forward to family time, mate time, and the meeting of the minds.
Fullofpassion09 chapter 28 . 3/16/2012
I agree both povs added instead of distracted...
Fullofpassion09 chapter 27 . 3/16/2012
I only hope he remembers Alice's advice to no matter what trust Bella... I also can't help but wonder if any plan Bella comes up with would of really come to fruition without Alice... Hopefully her heart is in the place to realize she is sacrificing her sister and brothers mate, she hasn't given reason to pause but you can't always be certain...
Fullofpassion09 chapter 26 . 3/16/2012
Love the relationship forming with Tanya... Usual there is a reason I be wary if not hate her...

Zafrinia's tactic was underhanded but effective...
Fullofpassion09 chapter 25 . 3/15/2012
Doesn't any good partner think they are never enough, that their counterpart deserves more, better?

Is that you way of foreshadowing separation nearing the climax?

That last declaration was rather ominous...

After reading this chapter I could see were they are better suited for water... Interesting idea
Fullofpassion09 chapter 24 . 3/15/2012
Hell yea... It's like having pocket aces in poker, except once trained shed be the ultimate defense and offense in battle!
Fullofpassion09 chapter 22 . 3/15/2012
I hope she remembers how to let people in and out of her mind once she awakes...

I wonder if she has a primitive, for lack of a better word, version of vampire thinking capacity/ intellect...

Really enjoyed your take on the change...
Fullofpassion09 chapter 21 . 3/14/2012
clever way to get rid of the pixie...

wow...she's a lot calmer then most would be in her shoes...

thats my kind of fighting...makes me wonder what make-up sex would be like if they really fought...
Fullofpassion09 chapter 20 . 3/14/2012
i was curious to why the dark look passed over his features...

I was thinking on this from last night when I read...if they find out about her shield as a human...they will covet her just as much...I don't know if they conciously thought of the yet...

i like how you expaling the way he saw her thoughts and how it was to him...

i wonder why it hasn't occured to them yet that she could manipulate it?...

the past really can bite you in the arse...

loved maggie but can't wait for the outting, as it were...
aemd28 chapter 31 . 3/14/2012
I really enjoyed this story. It was fun to read about my favourite vamps with your twist on them. The story you told was so fascinating, I found it hard to live my life when I could have been reading :)
Fullofpassion09 chapter 19 . 3/14/2012
Love that flying unnerves her but vampires, conspiracies, and all they entail and she doesn't bat an eyelash...

I like how you used the dog to really open her eyes finally...

Enjoyed the visit overall... Although your not in the a/n about Leah and Charlie playing a role later on has a whole batch of new theories blooming...
Fullofpassion09 chapter 18 . 3/14/2012
In your idea is mating a matter of choice? I seem to be a bit puzzled by that.

Dum dum dum... The plot thickens and she's not even immortal yet... Wonder what the key is?...

If he did that Bella would never forget and would blame herself...

Thank jeebus!

Like the slip of fiancée in there...
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