Reviews for The Foreign Papers
Debby-1957 chapter 13 . 5/15/2016
Edward did make her say it out loud, but she retaliated in the same way. I always love the bits and pieces of the books and movies that occasionally pop up unexpectedly in a story. Like Alice jumping gracefully over the ledge and landing close to Bella. And this sentence made me smile:
"He smirked at the thought of her dancing on the balls of her feet in anticipation."
Debby-1957 chapter 12 . 5/15/2016
Yeah, he'll probably make her say it... out loud. This chapter was a very cool parallel to Bella's googling 'vampires'.
Debby-1957 chapter 11 . 5/15/2016
This was a fascinating chapter with a bunch of clues!
Debby-1957 chapter 10 . 5/15/2016
She's close to figuring it out and he's afraid she will run away screaming!
Debby-1957 chapter 9 . 5/15/2016
Another interesting chapter!
Debby-1957 chapter 8 . 5/15/2016
I kind of understand why she hasn't put the clues together. It's just too implausible. Her mind rejects it; at least for now.
Debby-1957 chapter 7 . 5/15/2016
I think that unique histories for the familiar characters will be interesting.
Debby-1957 chapter 6 . 5/15/2016
It sounds like a fascinating challenge - to unravel the mystery of Edward.
Debby-1957 chapter 5 . 5/15/2016
It's good he's trying to be a gentleman. But things seem to always be intense when a vampire is involved.
Debby-1957 chapter 4 . 5/15/2016
It's always fun to see the usual suspects turn up in the story.
Debby-1957 chapter 3 . 5/15/2016
Bella better be careful of 'those European types'! LOL
Debby-1957 chapter 2 . 5/14/2016
She preferred to think of it as an adventure instead of a mistake. That's good. He put his hand on her thigh? Well...
Debby-1957 chapter 1 . 5/14/2016
Very interesting beginning. Yes, Alice is being quite odd!
Ticcing Bat chapter 31 . 5/11/2016
oh! well that was lovely, so well written too. it's rare that I find a vampward I've not read. I only like to read vampward, real life is tough. I like the escapism. thank you for writing this. I'm off in hope to search through your profile, for more vampward. hopefully.
2loveybunnies chapter 2 . 4/25/2016
I like older Edward and Bella! Very curious to see how you've changed things up.
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