|Reviews for Waiting for the End|
| noot40 chapter 15 . 8/5/2013
This is great so far. I love the angst
| tahlaalouisee chapter 38 . 7/21/2013
You have quickly become my favourite author. This story has made me laugh, cry and realise just how precious life really is. You have a natural gift for writing and I hope one day I can do that with my stories!
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/18/2013
Why does everyone feel Edward is doing wrong and not Bella? she encouraged him to go out on the night she lost the baby, and then tells Jacob that they lost their baby because they shouldn't be together, overhearing this Edward in need of someone to talk to, when his friend and brother are tied up with their own lives turns to Tanya, and at this point may I point out that Jake who Bella turned to when she needed to talk has the same feelings for Bella that Tanya has for Edward. Alice then tells Edward he should quit talking to Tanya, well in that case shouldn't Bella also be told by Alice to quit talking to Jake?
Bella then says to Edward "Look, after last night you obviously have some decisions to make. I know you still care about Tanya..." well it's obvious to me she should be taking a good look at herself as she has feeling for Jake and it works both ways.
| blue125 chapter 38 . 12/9/2012
I'm really delighted surrprised by this story. The story and the characters feel realistic to me. It's not over the top, it feels real to me. I feel for the characters, their sadness, their anger, and their heartbreak. It's quite an emotional read for me. That's why I'll definitely come back for your other stories. Thank you for a beautiful and moving story.
| kfoll chapter 13 . 12/5/2012
I find myself wanting to slap this Bella silly!
| kfoll chapter 12 . 12/5/2012
Please don't tell me that whilst he has been fucking the lovely Tanya, the only sex that she's had was date rape? No, that would be double standards to the extreme. That would be just ridiculous!
| kfoll chapter 10 . 12/5/2012
These two are a lost cause! He's a cheating skank and she's an emotionless bitch!
| kfoll chapter 8 . 12/4/2012
I can't believe she just let the stripper thing go? I would have chopped his fucking cock off!
| kfoll chapter 7 . 12/4/2012
So because he didn't fuck the stripper, that's supposed to make what he did forgiveable? Not in my eyes! It was like he was looking for an excuse to dump the old ball and chain. What a c**t!
| kfoll chapter 4 . 12/4/2012
Two weeks his baby has been dead and he's already contemplating doing the dirty? Quality guy!
| kfoll chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
Another delusional prick who blames everyone but himself for what goes wrong in his life!
| avagurl chapter 38 . 9/27/2012
Really enjoyed your angsty story. It was quite realistic how you dealt with the loss of the baby, and how Bella acted after, and how Edward just needed someone to let him be.
I found the 2 "best friends" storyline to be very intriguing as there were different dynamics but similar feelings for the best friend. Neither were willing to give up the bff for the other and their relationships with the bff were far more intimate than should be comfortable. The resolutions to these bff's were good.
The Rose/Em stuff was good, and loved that Ben tried to spy for Mike, unsuccessfully.
I was surprised that no one else came forward as a victim of Mike's but decided he had worked his evilness in some other jurisdiction.
Would have liked more info as to why Bella safeworded, and then passed out another time.
It was a good heartfelt story with some suspense and drama and I am glad I read it. I will read other of your stories.
| Jaygm chapter 38 . 8/25/2012
This story was one helluva a ride. At times- hard to read. But fantastically written and I couldn't stop reading once I started. This story is well-written and really deserves to be well-read. Thank you for sharing this gem.
This is indeed a well hidden treasure in the Twilight fanfiction archives. It is well worth reading again!
| PhoenixRN chapter 38 . 8/16/2012
Wow, what an amazing story. You truly are a gifted writer. Once i started reading, I couldn't stop- I just had to see what happened next. I love how it wasn't fluffy and that the characters weren't perfect, but I'm still a sucker for a happy ending! Thank you so much for sharing this!
| jojobear33 chapter 38 . 5/25/2012
I just found and finished it! This whole story was amazing